El cavernícola

jo987_123

50 capítulos leídos

Enjoyable

"An enjoyable story, though it did trigger my inner schoolmarm with the spelling mistakes 🤭 I'm assuming the writer had just never seen the words written down, or was using speech to text that got confused. I thought the story would be spicier and darker than it is, based on the writers warnings, but it felt more like a cosy sunday afternoon read to me. "

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Andrew Wader

7 capítulos leídos

Caveman

"I appreciate and enjoy stories that depict time travel back in time. Lexi has written such a story, but its main strength lies in the way she writes, presenting her adventures with the Caveman in a way that is engaging, youthful, yet sensual and arousing. Reading her text is relaxing and soothing."

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Randall

21 capítulos leídos

Caveman

"Good story sort of a reverse where someone from the past is teleported to the future easy entertaining read "

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TerryNullius

43 capítulos leídos

Time travel story. Some spice and violence.

"Time travel. Forced proximity. I was expecting a dark romantic drama based on the authors warning at the start. What I found in this book was an incredibly sweet caveman, consensual spice and a patronisingly naive female lead who spent a lot of time being concerned she would ‘take advantage’ of the caveman based on her (clearly incorrect) assumption that because she was from the future she was ‘more advanced’. Violent sections were clearly marked, so that is helpful if you like to avoid those. Some of the female leads thought processes were so bizarrely hilarious I actually laughed out loud. I couldnt really get into the drama because my mind re-cast this as a comedy. If the author intended this then well done. I ended up reading to the end for a laugh. There were a number of minor editing errors throughout ( eg ‘thrown’ instead of ‘throne’). "

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47 capítulos leídos

Se lee

"Se lee, pero sin más. Diálogos un poco inconexos, pobres. Pero está entretenida"

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