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Masterpeice

"The story was a slowburn. And i loved it very much."

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Obsession 😍

"Saksham is obsessed with Misthi 🥰. Their spicy romance and fights 😘🫣. Saksham: Mishti you are mine and anyone try to touch you uska haal jaysingh jaisa hoga 😱😱. Mishti ke papa kalank hai father society par 😤. Saksham ki family bhot supportive h . Rudra to Mishti se chipka rhta h jo Saksham ki pasand nahi 😁😆. Mishti ke liye Saksham ka pyar or care best h 😘🥰"

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theeeeeee bestt

"the bestt book verr the storyy ufff hisjealousyy pls put more intimate dark scens and uploaf snap 92"

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It's a good story

"It's a nice novel and I like the story and the plot and content here in this story. The characters in the story is well and good. I love this story fully"

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everything is perfect.

"nice writting skills love it. "

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wow

"didi you wrote an amazing and i cant with for the end "

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His ruthless obsession

"To kavya dii, Didu you're definitely doing a great job and continue writing and and your detailed explanation in the story is perfect and you're good to go Your lovely reader 💋🥰🥰"

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Please upload next part very soon I love your story so much ❤️ 💗

"Please upload next part very soon I love your story so much ❤️ 💗 "

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Love thee storyyy and your story writing keep it upp more love too youu

"Love the story keep goingg "

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Loved it

"Darling I do t use insta"

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His Ruthless Possession

"I want Mishti to be okay and follow her heart. I want her to get the live she needs and to heal. Why does he hide the fact that it us really his bracelet and what happened to her during her childhood that she clearly dies not remember. Will his adobt3d family forgive her and where did he come from? Will he be okay after drinking the drink? "

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Good

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Mishti+shaksham=Mishka

"It's an intense plot...good story"

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his ruthless possession

"I have been loving this book but now I feel like the story has started to lose its charm. I will give a genuine review—I have been reading this novel from the very beginning, and initially it was engaging, well-paced, and full of curiosity. The characters were interesting and the plot had potential, which kept me hooked. However, as the story progressed, it began to feel repetitive and unnecessarily stretched. The pace has slowed down a lot, important moments don’t feel impactful anymore, and some scenes seem to exist only to fill pages. What once felt exciting now feels predictable, making it hard to stay invested. I still appreciate the effort and the strong start, but at this point, the novel has become boring and no longer holds the same excitement it did earlier."

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