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Great concept
"This has been a great read. It's an interesting and unique plot and full of bad ass women learning about the strength found in sisterhood. There's a few parts that feel a bit rushed or convenient, at times inconsistent, but overall, this is definitely worth reading."
Bravo
"Bonne intrigue, au rythme soutenu. Une histoire qui est original et donne envie de savoir la suite. "
Marqué durant notre sommeil
"Lecture abordable pour les adolescents dès ≈13ans. L’histoire est innovante, captivante et inspirante ! J’aimerais bien une suite, car je me suis attachée aux personnages et j’aimerais continuer à lire! "
Great Twists
"I love this story! It's a great twist on a corrupt pack. You can sense something isn't quite right in the pack from the beginning. But to slowly see what is happening, and why, is heartbreaking. And nobody in the pack is spared the consequences of what has been going on."
Marked in our dreams
"Great plot, suspenseful and worth reading over and over again "
Great short story
"This is a great story of females who were treated as less than property. The fight for survival to live a life like it should be for every person regardless of gender. In the end all comes to a head and you can read this book to find out what happens..."
Marked While We Slept
"Loved the story but there has to be more or a sequel to answer all the unanswered questions. Please continue. Tracey K."
Great read
"This was a very good story. It was short and sweet but well thought out. I would love to see a continuation. See what became of the pack and the bonds. So much room for more. Great work!!!"
Love it💜🥰
"Beautifully written. Got so engrossed in the storyline. I hope you do a series of each of the marked women's lives after, what choices they made, how they help evolve the pack. It would be a series I would be right there ready to read each one😉 thank you very much for a story I couldn't put down until I finished it. 💜🥰"
Great Book
"Great well written book, unique story. A book you can not stop reading, not set down. Recommend it to anyone who likes fantasy and urban fantasy and strong women."
Good
"I wanted you to know that this book was written with a very strong emphasis on women and the story line was totally different. Not your typical story. Good job. "
What a twist from the norm
"Distinctively different in plot and theme from anything else I have read. Characters are well developed and interesting. You can't help but to root for the women. Only small negative is a few grammatical errors or typos."
Intrigue intéressante
"J'aime beaucoup le concept, mais peut-être à exploiter encore davantage, j'aurais aimé pouvoir m'attacher aux liens qui se créés entre les filles et leurs compagnons, on aime quand c'est compliqué quand le chemin est difficile et là c'est vrai qu'on sent la tension de cette guerre à venir, la stratégie mise en place mais on ne sent pas assez que les filles puissent se sentir utilisé dans cette guerre, même si ça part d'une bonne intention sauver la meute d'un alpha cruel, pareil ça a manqué de faits difficiles vecus par les filles, tout va trop vite je pense et pas assez de péripéties c'est finalement trop simple, les personnages sont trop lisses et uniformes quelque part ça manque de caractères différents qui ne vont pas agir comme on l'attend, ça manque de force Néanmoins le livre est prometteur et avec un travail sur cette partie là je pense qu'il peut carrément cartonner."
A lot of changes in the story that contradicted previous chapters
"I was quite disappointed, it started off so good, the way the mate bond was explained, how Riley's felt strong, ancient, powerful etc .....I expected her mate to be the stronger one, a lycan perhaps or some powerful lineage, especially with the way it was described..."
Hard to review an unfinished novel
"For the most part it was a decent story, a mystery at the beginning, a group of women treated unfairly by the misogynistic leadership of the pack, the slow team building of the group to both survive and get stronger, the inevitable battle for said leadership....and then it stops. No follow up, no chapters designed to finish the story and bring that HEA ending. The villain is beaten, tries a last gasp of desperation and is stopped. Then the story stops. It's like the author got right up to the HEA and said...I don't think so. This story touches on severe emotional and physical hardship for a group of women in a male dominated wolf pack, who rise above their station and work towards a better outcome. It's predictable, like most of these are. There's little mystery about who did this to them, except for a brief moment initially. Consider this a decent start to a novel, if you read it then expect to get a ton of baggage, a large amount of suffering, then no place to put it. Author, if you ever decide to finish this novel then I will adjust my review. But for now, I can't really review a partial novel. "
