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wonderful

"i love how a lone man fell in love with an orphaned woman . i love the story ! "

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Cabin Fever

"Grizz’s reclusive, self-sufficient life in the remote cabin is portrayed in grounded, understated detail, making his quiet routine and emotional detachment feel authentic and layered. The calm rhythm of his solitary days is sharply disrupted by the sudden appearance of unexpected outsiders. The subtle underlying friction and unspoken awkwardness between them are portrayed really naturally, with restrained tension that lingers quietly without overdoing the drama. i love this one"

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cabin fever

"loved the story, it flowed nicely. keep up the great work!"

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Cálida a pesar del frío

"La historia está muy bien escrita y narrada, va directo al punto y me encanta"

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Love

"I loved this story ❤️"

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Cabin Fever

"Beautiful love story. Great short story gets to the point without a lot of fluff. Given the setting of the story, seems realistic enough for the story. Editing isn't perfect but far better than most. Would be nice to read more about these solid characters."

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Belle histoire

"C’etait court mes suffisant, une belle histoire pour une bonne soirée le ture 🥰"

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CABIN FEVER

"NICE ACCOUNT SHOWING MEN, NO MATTER HOW RESERVED APPRECIATE A TRUE COMPANION"

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Great start, not so great ending

"I loved the story. It's really good at the beginning, but at the end it's very chaotic and hard to read. It feels like ending is a first draft, or not even that. I really want the writer to edit the ending so this story could be very good, not just good. ❄️🩵💙"

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