¿Qué opinas?
GOOD WRITING STYLES PLUS LIVE THE STORY
"After my come back to inkitt after 6 years. This is the first story i read, and I'm glad i read it beautifully written"
To author
"Author disappointed me from " goodbye" chapter. No creativity? no CEO brilliant minds ? Just give up? Two pathetic lovers! The happy ending was a kindness of a villain . "
Really like the setting, but...
"I really like the setting and the dynamic of the characters, but I unfortunately can't get over the constant AI-isms in literally every second paragraph: "This is not X, this is Y/<metaphor>. Adjective. Adjective."; "This is not just <superlative>, this is <hyperlative>, <transformation>". I don't have an issue with using AI at all, but it feels like there's a right way and a wrong way to do so: this didn't feel like the right way to me, and I have read other stories that aren't shy about using the "AI-Assisted" label on this site and am surprised that this story isn't."
