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Sweet sin

"To author. I read all the stories ryker Nolan, Darian thyrn now kelvin Damon. Your writing style is amazing. I love your stories. I eagerly waiting for your next story."

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My sweety sin

"What a compelling love story. I can't bear people that use children as part of a battle. I think your resolution of this was very satisfying. Insecurities and jealousy were overcome to give us the happy ending. Thank you"

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My sweety sin

"Well this was a long ride but I enjoyed every bit of it💙 it was a roller-coaster but it was fun and amazing "

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Belle histoire/ beautifull story

"Belle histoire/ beautifull story Histoire douce pour une histoire avec des personnages à la limite de la légalité./ Sweet story for a story with characters on border of legality. Miam 😋"

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Excelente

"Me gustó mucho sobre todo la evolución de los personajes y ese enemy to lovers, una joya!"

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Good Read

"The book overall was a good read. It wasn’t long and drowned out straight into the point understanding that every writer is different, but I was looking forward to more when it came to the intimacy nonetheless, they do not take away how well the book was written a couple misspelled words nonetheless I understood what they were trying to say so it didn’t really bother me honestly I’m no English teacher no language teacher so I kept it moving. Another person who reviewed the book said that they felt like the end was rushed and I understood what they were saying a little bit. overall it was a good read, and I would recommend for others to read it. "

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Final

"Llegamos al final, tengo penita, la saga y sus historias me han gustado muchísimo 👏 👏 👏 "

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Great

"It has a little of everything romance action and real emotional development. I love seeing the side characters have their own storylines also. "

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Daddyvibe🤩

"There's always something about men in love and I love Kelvin's mature touch to this story how he handles every situation it's heart-warming🥰From Damon's past he really needed a daddy type of man he's precious 💕 and needs lots of care and loving he sure is a princess.."

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Good

"The story is very good, but I felt the ending was a bit rushed. But i still enjoyed it. "

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Enjoyed it

"A good story, good characters too, Damon makes you think he's a soft touch when he actually isn't and Kelvin comes across as a right dick to start with but then he does a turn around too. It's not too long, not too much waffle, the story tells itself, would've liked to know more about dodgy Carlos though, he sounds interesting 😆😆. I hope that Monica and Paul ended up suspiciously disappearing or something. All in all I enjoyed it and couldn't walk away until I'd finished. Thanks for the good read."

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My sweety sin

"I luv how t story went from sad 2 good "

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review

"i really lived the book"

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Nice story but very tame

"I read the whole story and the storyline was ok, but there was quite a lack of background info on mist characters. Also most characters had very strange names and there were quite some typos and grammar mistakes in the book. Also, there was zero sex which I found quite boring, theyre hardly kissing and when they do it is described very plainly. I prefer a bit more physical connection between the characters. Not a bad story overall but I wouldnt read it again."

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Bhb

"...good one and well written "

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