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Waiting patiently

"Loved the story line and how it’s managed to keep my attention. Just wished I could read the 3rd instalment now. Keen to know how the story ends. "

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I cannot rate a plot that doesn't conclude

"I enjoyed the story, the characters are well described, the plot is solid with a bit of mystery. It could have more of it. Nonetheless, the characters are developing well. I understand there's a third book coming, but I am not a fan of books leaving readers hanging ... just for the sake of it. It just doesn't fell finished. Whether happy or sad, it needs to have a finish, to properly close a chapter. The next book can then have another plot. "

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Claimed by the Alpha

"Amazing read here! So much to read and yet there will be more! Thankyou Dear Authour for your words and part three is keeping me checking everyday for the release 🤠 🫶"

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Can’t wait for book 3

"Loved it minus gabi forgiving Luca so easily and not nearly enough smut scenes that are detailed and long! Please add more "

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Love

"I love these books. I’m so glad they are in love "

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Claimed by the Alpha

"So far so good! The dreams are so intense and real. I pray that Gabriella and Luca are mates! Can't wait for Serephina get what she deserves."

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Claimed by the Alpha

"Loved the book read it in a few hours couldn’t put it down "

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5 star

""The structure of this story is as impressive as the prose. Every act builds on the last with intention and precision. Nothing here happened by accident.""

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Claimed by the Alpha

"Love all the characters! The first two books kept me interested and wanting more! Can’t wait for the third book, Chosen by the Alpha! When do you think it will be ready for release?"

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Claimed by the alpha

"I liked it all except it ended to quick and i want Mor amazing story hurry with the next one "

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Great read

"Great read so far, love how it flows from book one to this one. Easy to read and keeps your attention. "

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Compelling Story

"Recommend both books! Compelling stories and characters. Love Gabi’s best friend - brings levity and some laughs in the middle of the drama. There were a few inconsistencies: a character stands up but then they’re inexplicably getting up from the floor a couple paragraphs later. Couple others I don’t recall. Didn’t detract too much from the story but did cause some momentary confusion. Overall, I commend the author for interesting characters and good plot. "

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Awesome

"I really enjoyed reading 1 and 2. In fact, I binge-read 2 all the way through. I like all of the characters but my favorites are Tess and Amara. I also like Rowan and Marcus. The writing was strong, but toward the middle and end, the punctuation started slipping. But not enough to disrupt the story. I can't wait for book 3."

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Super engaging

"This book is exciting and fast paced. I love the characters. I can't wait to see Gabi's powers come to life. It feels like a pity that she is still struggling. How is it that Sera was never exposed by the Alpha? So many questions. I hope the third book answers them. "

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Beautiful

"Beautifully written story, great characters and a touch of humour is cherry on top..love reading it."

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When is last part coming?

"Very well written. I couldn’t sleep without finishing this book. "

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Good story

"I love the humor in it. I like that not all is revealt in hte begæring."

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Another read within 24hrs

"I cannot put your books down @millierivers "

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Claimed by the Alpha

"Can't believe it ended too soon but I hope the last book comes right after this one, loved both ❤️ "

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Claimed by the Alpha

"So many twists and turns and everything so well written you can't help but fall into worlds being built. Can't wait to read more of your work, my only problem is that I can't put it down and my life goes on hold whilst Iread🩷"

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