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True talent

"I only started reading this because I was waiting for the completion of Prince of the Savage Desert, and before I knew it, this story had me hooked! I've been on this app for around a year and B. F. Nelson is one of the best story tellers to date! I can't wait to finish Dahlia's story next, Laina was amazing! The only thing I would have liked to see is her leg finally get healed at the end."

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Loved it

"Intense fight scenes, enjoyable!!"

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Emotional ❤️

"Amazing story... Can’t wait more chapters. Thank you kindly "

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An emotional journey

"Started this because I love this author’s other stories. This one is JUST AS GOOD. This is an emotional journey. Laina struggles every day while her ex lives a life of luxury. So far, he doesn’t know it’s his fault she lost her magic. Not sure how he’s going to get her back and make things better but excited to find out. "

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