¿Qué opinas?
Wow 👌
"Became so immersed it this story my heart raced at times. I personally am not keen on excessive mentally "graphic" violence so had to jump some little bits but overall brilliantly written with very descriptive passages. Keep up the writing you have a fabulous imagination. "
Beautiful
"I love the writing style, the way words flow and how the story unfolds. I love as story is not repetitive, no un necessary doubling of the facts. Only sad she destroyed Druegar army, they were said to come to her aid by her spirit being. Anyways....this will be a wonderful book a keeper, and i would gladly buy it for my collection once its finished. "
The toast of the raven
"I’m in love with the main characters of this book! I can’t wait for the demise of the patriarch criminals! Or I could be mistaken it could turn around. I’m back fire! But I’m keeping my fingers crossed!"
Riveting, if a little rushed
"Thoroughly enjoyable fantasy, with a world unlike most others. The characters are largely well-rounded, as is the story - though there is a ton of detail and action that feels a bit rushed. Could spend a little more time building the foundation! Some errors in names being used incorrectly later in the book, and an odd transition to a heavy use of ellipses in the later segments. Feels somewhat rushed, but overall very enjoyable and well-written. Could easily be expanded into a series on its own."
A nice story
"It Is nice story so far. A bit confusing in terms of plot and characters, it's not very clear who they are and what they are supposed to do. "
