¿Qué opinas?
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"Ich finde die Geschichte toll. Sehr dynamisch und spannend. Die Beziehung zwischen den zwei Protagonisten war relativ gut. Ich fand nur das Ende war etwas abgehackt. Als hätte der Auto/die Autorin keine Lust mehr gehabt. Aber sonst einfach toll."
Just read it.
"Don't even bother checking the likes and reviews,i low-key know u won't regret it,i am a proof for that. I mean what possibly could you lose reading this...now,open itttt💗"
about the story
"loved it "
Almas de sangre
"Buenísima historia, me encanta! Los personajes son fantásticos y Axel es maravilloso. Me gustaría que fuera real y tener un Vampiro así para mí 🤭😍❤️🩸 muy bien escrito y muy buena trama, me encanta "
Perfecto
"Me encantó, sabía que máx no iba a morir"
Great story, poor editing!
"I read the whole story, even if I really struggled because of the poor writing style and the very bad editing. The story itself is very good and the ideas interesting. It's a shame the author didn't seem to find a platform improving her writing style and help with spelling and grammar."
Feeders-Max and Axle
"This was an enjoyable read sweet (for vampires ;) read. "
FEEDERS - MAX AND AXLE
"A good story with a decent plot. Two very interesting main characters. The male willing to compromise, not so much the female! But, she does learn quickly that she is better off where she is and adapts accordingly. A different approach with the human/vampire integration and not your 'typical' vampire story. The story structure has room for improvement as it appears to have been rushed with no editing. Spelling, punctuation and grammatical errors are countless, so if you can bypass that cringe-worthy fact, it is a story worth reading."
Feeders - Max and Axle
"It was good, really nice and scratches several itches. You can tell it's more of the "traditional" vampire theme. No magical powers, no fated mates and the like. Still ended a bit too abruptly and there was little to no explanation to several things. Just "I don't know" and no one ever talks about it again. Also Dorian... What was his motive? Just wanted to ruin Axle? Could have been better explained as could Axle and Max's connection. I am curious how vampires reproduce... Just turning? Secret babies? Just making my head itch. Still recommended, it's nice and relatively short. Max is strong headed and I like that when it comes to more "dominant" creatures like vampires. Enjoy."
Something new! The plot is hooks you right from the start!
"The plot has many new ideas I have never read anywhere else before and it is so interesting! I've been reading until a least 2a.m. these past nights! Grammatical errors are a pet peeve of mine but I have just glossed over them because the story is good."
Feeders Max and Axle
"Nice and interesting story"
