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Clairvoyant
"🥰 loved the story, great characters. Very well written you’re going on my new favourite author list and I’ve also read the artist which was very good."
Nice and catching!
"The story and plot are nice! I would recommend proofreading just to remove parts where you repeat information but under different circumstances. Also maybe some character description could be shorter as after that they are not so relevant in the process. But in general with a small polishing that will be great story which is different from other books! Keep up with the great work"