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Heartwarming

"Heartwarming story of love between two people who work together a joint future overcoming their insecurities and past. Chapter 2 is difficult to understand with today and friday plans overlapping. Once you get over chapter 2, the story really takes off"

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The best love story I have ever read the best of all thanki so much for letting us read your amazing and beautiful masterpiece

"The best love story I have ever read it was best honestly thanku so much for letting us read your beautiful and amazing live story"

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Had potential, but needs editing

"I loved the first chapter, but dropped the story in the second one because the dialog did not make sense anymore. I hope someone will proofread and edit, because I really like the story idea."

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