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Really good story

"Highly recommend to read this story not as short as you may think really detailed and well written "

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Love it

"Schöne kurze Geschichte.😍Vielleicht ein 2ten Bich🤔 "

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Geschichte

"Schade das es kurz vor dem Ende die Geschichte in Englisch übergeht. Bitte mal in Deutsch nochmal. Danke schön "

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Épilogue

"Pourquoi l’épilogue n’est pas en français ?"

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Doktor

"This was a very good story line with a very good ending. Coodos!!!"

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Really good

"It was really nice reading this. Really kinda peaceful there were no crazy ex’s or wanna be ones trying to come between them. His dad was accepting. I get so tired of the same storyline with nutty as* women that can’t let go because they weren’t picked. Thank you for writing this. "

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Doktor

"A charming love story with Dr Tessa's altruism and public service balancing Dimitri's mafia background until they create a loving family and a hospital to serve the community. A lovely story, thanks for sharing."

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Well written story

"The book is well-written. Enjoyable to read, the story has thriller elements and a beautiful romance. I am glad that the writer decided to add more to the story to bring some sort of closure. I would say it is a quite beautiful happy ending."

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Skalpell und Verrat

"Der Roman ist spannend, überzeugend geschrieben, aber leider änderte sich im letzten Kapitel die Sprache in Englisch. Ich fand keine Möglichkeit, den Roman ins deutsche zu übersetzen. Deshalb konnte ich nicht zu Ende lesen. "

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Doktor

"Nice story"

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A lovely story

"Really well written and very knowledgeable from the author Loved the characters Left you wanting more Well done "

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Storyline is good, but many errors and inconsistencies

"This story had a lot of potential. Unfortunately there were many flaws in the story. References to events that never happened or happened differently, but also the timelimes were unclear throughout the story. There ware many typos, especially chapter 8 is a mess and chapter 3 is unfinished, chapter 4 is a copy of chapter 4 but finished. Other errors were for example Dimitri being in the back of the restaurant, and then being carried inside with a bullet wound. Yuri being treated at the clinic, but later he was treated at a safehouse? Tessa talking to Ivan, then suddenly to Yuri. Tessa and Dimi both saying to take things slow, but then proceed to kiss and sex and say I love you within seeing eachother twice. And what doctor has unsafe sex 4 times and just shrugs her shoulders and completely ignores that it happened? The spicy scenes were repetitive. All these issues and more really bothered me and ruined the quality of the story for me. "

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Le médecin

"J’ai lu l’histoire d’une traite, elle est prenante et très bien écrite. Les personnage sont réalistes et attachants. Dommage que l'épilogue ne soit pas traduit en français également. Je recommande"

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Histoire sympa !

"L'histoire est mignonne et douce. Mais, vraiment, la lecture entièrement traduite en Français SAUF le dernier chapitre, c'est dur! J'ai compris l'ensemble mais je ne suis pas suffisamment à l'aise en Anglais pour avoir toutes les subtilitées..."

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