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So sweet

"Such a sweet story line. Love the way the characters personalities develop, from Jesse's fears to Callahan's armor finally cracking. An incredible and well written story x"

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Love it

"Equal parts hot 🔥 and hilarious, and surprisingly charming. I rarely read something where I genuinely love the characters but they have such developed personalities and Jesse especially is delightful. Really well written!"

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Loved it!

"Wow, what an amazing and well written story! Loved every moment 🔥🔥"

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Cal and Jessie

"I love this story so much. It has made me laugh, cry, and fall in love with these two. "

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Me gusta la diferencia de edad y carácter de ambos.

"Me gustó el desarrollo de la historia y la diferencia de edad y carácter de ambos "

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FUERA DE JUEGO Y SIN SECRETOS

"Ame la historia de principio a fin, y el como un accidente en las regaderas provocó ese amor tan bonito y salvaje a la vez se aplicó el del odio al amor solo hay un paso y aunque el chico que tomo accidentalmente el vídeo solo salió en escena una vez, fue suficiente para que Jesse y Cal tuvieran un desarrollo de pareja por contrato a reales y que amor tan apasionado.. "

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Sweet

"This was such a sweet and suspenseful book. I’d definitely read it again anytime! ☺️"

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Loved!

"Loved that you managed to create a femboy athlete in the most macho burly man-bear sport ever! Writing was well done, Happy Ever After was promised and delivered. "

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Love it!

"This story is well written! Male x Male love, a slight age gap, against the backdrop of a fictional NHL team = entertainment! Plus plenty of hot, sexy scenes that make the story even better!"

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Offsides & Undercovers

"This was a great story kept me engaged the whole time "

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Beautiful storytelling and flow

"I like the plot begin with accidental groin incident that begins the journey between the two leads. The character development and how the author provides detailed surrounding on the sound, smell and sight make it easier for me to immerse and imagine in my head. I feel I was there inside their heads. The story is spicy and tickles my funny bone! I laughed out loud reading interaction between the leads! You have influenced me to start watching on ice hockey. I am blessed and honored to read your story. I will continue to support your writing. Keep writing great stories!"

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OFFSIDES & UNDERCOVERS

"Thia good is honestly so good. The plot is well written, the realationship and dynamics are amazing, overall just a good book in genral."

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You’ll b glad you read this book!

"Absolutely amazing book. The chemistry between the main characters is off the charts. Descriptive in a way that delivers humor and spice. It was great all the way through. "

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Enjoyed this very much

"Thanks for writing and sharing this story! It was very entertaining and had a good plot, great characters. I always enjoy a good age gap romance, as well as hockey romance! And how their relationship was public and received well. Not sure that’s how it always works in real life but it should. So thanks! "

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Absolutely brilliant

"Loved this story from start to finish, amazingly funny but at the same time steamy. I enjoyed the dynamics of the characters, was hooked from the start. Good job author, I recommend this book with all my heart👌❤🤗"

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