¿Qué opinas?
Loved this story
"I personally loved this story and the way it's written. It's a beautiful love story, there's emotions and also some funny bits making you smile or laugh. I also loved that there wasn't any annoying unnecessary drama (like keeping secrets from each other etc).. I would like to read more stories like this 😊🌹"
I’m Officially Hooked!
"I’m Intrigued “Okay, I’m officially hooked. I came to read one chapter and somehow I’m still here. The story keeps pulling me in.”"
Something is very wrong here...
"All the dialog between characters give off the same personalities. Whether it's female to female. Male to male. Male to female, or even adult to child; all the dialog seems to have the same cadence, humor, and intelligence. Multiple times, lines were repeated as if the author forgot they wrote then already and contradictions were made like the author forgot which way they were going with the story. One chapter blatantly changed the scene of the "first night over" from the previously set scene. Then there's the fact that I could count on one hand how many paragraphs exist in this book with more than 2 sentences. All this put together made this book feel very wrong. Like it was poorly written by AI rather than a human that would truly cherish the work and pour their heart into it. Would not recommend."
