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I Broke Into The Alpha's House
" Loved the story front to back. Great characters and great plot! "
I broke into the alphas house
"Really enjoyed this, much so that I've read it twice and shared it with my reader friend 😁 keep up the writing you've fantastic skills ❤️"
Je me suis introduite dans la maison de l’alpha
"Cette histoire est douce, je l’aime beaucoup. Toutefois, je pense que certaines scène auraient besoin d’être approfondies."
Hermosa historia
"Me encanto. Ojalá tus otras historias estuvieran en castellano "
I Broke into the Ailpha’s House
"I loved the story Great job!"
Great story but still needs some editing with typos
"Very nice story and characters. Typos really need to be addressed. Punctuation and spacing. Some words run together. "
Easy Read
"Loved the story and the characters very well written. I had trouble putting my phone down I was sucked into the world the author wrote. There's some parts that I don't enjoy reading that's only because of the abuse and torture I personally don't like that but to be honest it was written PG not rated R so I appreciated that. I'm hoping there's going to be a sequel someday because I feel like there's More that could be said it ended kinda at a cliffhanger but overall great story and highly recommend reading it"
Very good
"Just read the whole story this evening. It was sweet ,it could of used a little more spice. What about their friends ? Did they have kids? I really like the story when she turned into her wolf that was a surprise. Very good with the English language wow. You are amazing. Wishing you so much luck in the future with school and writing. "
Life becomes better with a mate & family
"This story started with a broken family living in so much fear & tragedy and concluded with a family so together & strong. A lovely HEA💗"
Great ❤️
"Another great book. It is not like your other books but i absolutly loved it. I liked the the extra chapters too. I hope you can bring out this book, good luck. ❤️"
Great story
"There was a lot of spacing mistakes throughout the whole book. I liked the story it pulled you through. I liked that it was not the usual story line and not overly sexual. It was different from all the other werewolf stories. I was confused on the town. It sounds as if the packhouse was on the edge of a human town? A little more description was needed about the werewolf town. This story was great for readers of all ages. I am glad you added some chapters after the epilogue to continue the story, but they feel disjointed and don't go with the flow of the original story. But it ends strange then, with the daughter finding errors her mate. Re-title the eplilogue and included the new chapters in the book. The chapter about her daughter finding her mate seems unfinished. Are you trying to write the next book in a series, thats what it feels like the next book. I definately wanted to read about the children and see their perspectative. I like the story line. If you are going to publish it I would work on a little more character development of the additional characters in the book, just not the main 2. The story line needs more details and descriptions of things. For a first time author, I think you did a great job. I would read more stories from you."
I broke into the alphas house
"I loved this would recommend to my disabled nans dog"
I broke into the Alphas house
"I love this book. Love the authors writing style, without pages of descriptive sex. Instead we get more story."
I broke into the Alpha's house
"Great story, I can't wait to finish reading it"
Love it
"The book is great, im no author, but I like the detailed description of every situation it helps with the imagination some of the words are not spaced not sure if its suppose to be like that."
I broke into the alfas house
"IT WAS A GOOD READ THE PART ABOUT THE BROTHER I THOUGHT COULD OF BEEN A BIT SHORTER. ONLY BECAUSE I KNOW THIS TITLE IS AIMED AT YOUNG READERS. I ENJOYED THE BOOK .TY"
I love that you get to read it in both prospective and to just words there is feeling
"I love how it written from the different angles of the persons prospective and the way it flows and keeps u wanting tk find out what's next"
Muy bueno
"Está muy bien estructurado, narrado y logras conectar con los personajes, es muy buen libro "
Loving this novel
"Nothing to say"
I Broke Into The Alpha's house
"I seriously loved the book enough to actually read it twice. With english not being the authors first language and with her having written this book at such a young age, I am surprised because if it wasn't stated before the start of the book you'd never be able to tell. I do hope the author considers adding the book to the premium list that's available to authors on this site. Though I myself don't currently have the funds to help her out,I do look forward to returning to reread this amazing book again in future when I do have the means to read a paid version of this wonderful story and I look forward to reading more of her books in the future as well. I simply couldn't put it down until I finished reading it. Truly amazing talent and well done"
