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Excellence

"This book is very captivating. I can't put it down and don't want to. Great job!!"

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The Lieutenant

"Such a good short story! I really enjoyed the slow burn and loved the whole story in all! "

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Awesome

"It definitely could use a part 2 "

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The lieutenant

"So far I'm really enjoying the book. I love Harper's character and how she's always testing the boundaries lol. Can't wait to find out what happens next!!"

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So goood

"I loved it so much "

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Before You Go

"I think this book was very well written. I loved the characters and the plot development. I think the author did a very good job developing the plot, and nothing seemed out of order."

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Lieutenant,love,baby,family

"I loved this story so much I wish we had a part two on how Mr serious reacts in the real word and how they raise there baby together also how they deal with his asshat father, but this story was sweet funny and just so good loved every chapter, thank you for all your great books can't wait to read more keep it up all my love happy writing and happy reading 💖📚 🔥 💦 🌋 😁 😉"

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❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

"😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍"

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Good

"Very interesting read"

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Amazing!! Way to keep up waiting 😌

"Honestly love this book! It took a while to get to the juicy part, but honestly it was perfect! Who doesn’t love a slow burn heheh!! Keep up your amazing writing and don’t let anyone tell you less! -with love, comet ^^"

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I wish there was more time and thought put into it

"I really like this book I wish there was more to it though because I felt like I was only reading a few pages or chapters and then it was done so I wish that there was a lot more chapters to it and it wasn’t so quick and it felt like it was just done and dusted and I didn’t actually read a book so I did like the story itself but just wished it went on for a bit longer and there was more context to it and I wish that the scenes weren’t rushed and quick I wish they were more dragged on so it felt more real But 10 out of 10 story."

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The lieutenant

"I loved this book it was great I just wish it was longer but other than it was great!"

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Love this

"I cannot help but keep on reading until i finished all the chapter. I love how Axel melt for her. And only her. This is the first time I read a book about lieutenant. And I love it! It’s a whole new thing and it’s refreshing! "

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great

"Even though i just read it. if it turned into a book i would still buy. but hopefully a bit more information about harpers backstory "

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PHENOMENAL

"If you're thinking about reading this book ,goo for it!! Its the perfect blend of funny and sexyy with amazing charaters and back stories . Totally underrated and j absolutely loved ittt"

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Lieutenant

"Very interesting read"

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Finally a decent book!

"Man, I have been trying to find a new book that would captivate me and really pull me in for a few months now. I haven’t seen anything that I really liked in awhile. I tried so many but they would be too slow, too fast, written poorly or the plot was trash. I loved this book! It was different than all the other books on here and I am all for that. I want to write a military book next that’s how much I liked it! Good job writer, thank you for sharing your art ❤️"

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PERFECT

"It really made me feel the character and I nearly started crying at some points "

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Great story

"Loved how it ended well done enjoyed the story very much."

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THE BEST!!

"This book is filled with love, suspension, spicy scene, and it not all girly girly its tough love which you don't find in a lot of books. And its a rule breaker , even better!"

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