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Daddy's Newbie

"Yo that shit was lit. I'm look for for the sequel so I can enjoy the rest of what's going on. You're an excellent writer. "

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Nia and Lowe

"Riddling story… plot was great and I want more "

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I liked the plot . I would recommend my friend .I chose rating according to my understanding

"I liked the story of this novel . I would recommend it to my friend. I chose the rating according to my understanding."

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Daddies Newbie

"Thank you for sharing this one. Loved it. "

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Daddies newbie

"Wonderful story and waiting for the next book "

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Daddies Newbie

"I read this in like one day it was so good!!!"

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Very caliente

"Couldn't put my phone down. "

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Laughter

"Enjoyed the parts of the friends talking. See scenes were over the top nut interesting. "

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wosss

"love it the plot"

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daddy's newbie

"waiting for the next part..."

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Daddies Newbie

"it was a good story overall"

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Daddies newbie

"I enjoyed this story in the beginning,but sorry I couldn't get my self to finish it.🙁"

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THE OTHER SIDE

"mmmm.. ok it was something new to me to see a different side of a dom and sub's relationship also the climax was crazy like I never thought this guy is going to be some Mafia king and the thing that just didn't go well was like he let them take her away was he not having any security like he is a mafia king and he was thinking so much before throwing that girl Emily out and then what he just killed her wasn't it easy to just throw her out earlier... but anyways I enjoyed the erotica part beautifully written. I hope the sequel has some better things in it considering the past things...good job 👍"

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My dom

"Good book!!"

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Daddies Newbie

"I would have to finish the book before I can recommend this book to anyone because it has so many changes"

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DADDIES NEWBIE

"GREAT BOOK!!!"

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Uh... Cute ig

"I think this person wasn't very experienced with dom/sub relationships at the time of writing this but I give it a 5/10"

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Misleading she beware

"Hate when books say complete but are not just to get you started but no problem just add this to don’t read this author if you want a complete book"

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