¿Qué opinas?
Read
"I loved everything about this book seriously it's a must read "
A good story
"An interesting story buh a lot of grammatical errors and typographical error’s "
His
"The book was great. One u don't want to put down. "
Interesting
"This book is exciting interesting and lovable I would recommend this book to anyone who loves reading romance novels too good "
I love this
"After I've read this and the 5 amazing characters that are available in the free section at https.//.book.net.com I'm in love. I just really wish I could read the full story. As I am not in the spot to pay the small fee to read the rest. To the writer this is not meant for rudeness at all. I just really really would like to read the rest. Amazing job!!!! Love love love the story!!! Amazing job again."
I like it
"I love this book just a little grammar issues her and there but other than that I love this book!:)))) "
Dangerous marriagei
"I like how his plan starts to nnfold. Its not for the faint heart. I think she has the power to change his heart towards her"
From a college student.
"So the book is nicely written, I would love for you not to pay attention to the mean comments. I read books for fun or with my girlfriend. But all I have to say is go back fix the grammar, but other then that it’s a really nice book."
It's good but I think need new story ideas
"It was good I like Indian part tho need new story ideas because i read this concept before except for indian part "
Grammar and Spelling
"The typos and grammar errors made it so hard to read , wanted to stop reading but the characters are interesting "
Good
"I like the overall story the only thing that was difficult with the story over all is the grammar issues."
Alright
"I think this needs some work, maybe you just rushed through the story, English your first language? Feels like that may be the issue, best of luck to you on your publishing journey, I know people and it’s hard work. "
Good
"Interesting story and i think Tara will be a strong woman 😉"
0000
"Bad grammer"
Devil's Angel
"i love romantic novels n mafia stories that's why i liked it.. n the thing i disliked is that some story or chapters are missing so i m sad about this.. n i will recommend it to my best friend "
Devils girl
"I dislike that there is no unpredictable twist "
Interesting storyline/not translated well
"As an avid reader (English being my first language) this story seems to be translated from a different language because the “normal” phrases and wording are off. Some chapters are harder to read because they just don’t make sense and turning the words around to make sense becomes a chore. My suggestion is to have a proofreader who speaks English as a first language to help you with our little quirks as I do know it is a hard language to understand. I have quite a few ESL friends that have had to ask questions even though they have been here for years. Wish you all the best in your writing! "
Wasted my time reading this!!!
"Something seems to be off after chapter 15. She just met him and suddenly chapter 16 goes on about her being angry with him and looks like they are close to each other. Like what the hell happened in middle??? Was interested at first now i dont feel like reading at all!!!"
Incomplete
"Don't read this shit cause it's incomplete! The writer is money driven! "
