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L'alpha des whitefortis

"Je l'avais déjà lu mais j'ai pris plaisir à le relire. "

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Great story despite the significant grammar & spelling errors

"This story was great but you must look past the major spelling & grammar errors to really enjoy it. "

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Großartig

"Tolle Handlung, lädt zum Verweilen ein. Ab und zu gibt es Übersetzungsfehler, leider kann man dies nicht direkt an der Stelle markieren."

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A good read

"The book was good. Loved the characters, loved the plot. The books does need some serious editing, grammatical and punctuation. I generally tend to stop reading a book like this, but it was such a lovely story I carried on - and I’m glad I did. Looking forward to a book 2. "

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Belle plume

"Le sujet, les personnages, on aime ou pas ( moi j'ai aimé). Mais avant tout une belle écriture, fluide, écrit à la 3 ieme personne ( style de plus en plus rare dans la romantasy et pourtant tellement plus agréable)"

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Sehr schönes Buch

"Es ist sehr schön geschrieben und es macht Spaß es zu lesen 💗"

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Génial

"Le livre se lit très bien et j'ai adoré l'histoire! Pas d'obstacles super complexes dedans, j'ai vraiment aimé l'écriture, l'intrigue et les personnages ! Bravo!"

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Good storyline.

"I, enjoyed the story. The female lead was a character that earned sympathy as well as admiration. Her mate was worthy of her and deserved to be by her side. I would definitely read more stories by this author. I, had to give it one star for punctuation and grammar, it was horrible, it really needs to be edited better.."

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Nat

"Awesome book! I could not put it down!"

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The Whitefortis Alpha, Rewriting the Rules

"The storyline was very interesting and compelling! Winter is such a strong character and I like the way you made her mate equally as strong. A weak man would not have been believable. "

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The Whitefortis Alpha, Rewriting the Rules

"I liked the plot. Just I didn't get how they broke the curse! "

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Drama, suspense and romance

"This is one of the best rejection stories I have read. It doesn't fall into the same old clone abyss that many rejection stories come from these days. The plot has a little bit of everything. There is drama, suspense, humor, and, of course, romance. Kudos to the author for creating an imaginative and entertaining story. *"

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Amazing story

"Enjoyed your story very much! Easy to follow and read. A few spelling errors but nothing major that made it hard to read. Loved the characters they all had such different personalities."

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Great read so far

"Great read so far "

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The Whitefortis Alpha rewriting the rules

"Lots and lots of spelling mistakes, but overall an excellent book. Thanks Author "

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"The book had a lot of misspelled words and wrong words but it was really good"

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Oh my god !!!!

"I do not have enough words to express how much I loved this story ! The plot was so interesting, different and it keeps you on edge all the time. You have a strong FL which is sooo refreshing. I love a woman who doesn't take shit. The ML is very hot , strong and not your typical alpha. He actually listens! I loved the end so much ❤️ it was intense! Thank you, author !"

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Great plot

"I’m a sucker for a strong female mc, this did not disappoint! Loved the story, the adventure, the heartbreak, and the strength of moving forward. Minor grammatical issues that can easily be resolved, but overall well written and a fun read. I look forward to reading your other books. "

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The Whitefortis Alpha,Rewriting the rules.

"Absolutely loved it. Can't wait to read more. "

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The whitefortis alpha

"Great book!"

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