Una acampada con Shelby

Martin

25 capítulos leídos

13 de nov. de 2024

Interesting

"I enjoyed the story and thought it was well written. The initial idea of the fantasy was really good and perhaps shows how fantasies can go really wrong. The plot with an older woman falling for a much younger man is not that uncommon but adding his mother in was a really great twist. I think somehow a few more chapters could add to the story and give it some kind of ending which is lacking at present"

  • Valoración general
  • Trama
  • Estilo de escritura
  • Gramática y puntuación
¿Te ha resultado útil esta reseña?

lwillia34

25 capítulos leídos

5 de jun. de 2024

Cam-ping Shelby

"Surprising shocking a turn on. I like the openness of the couple. I didn’t like Shelby breaking the promises made but I am open to group sex So I found it exciting "

  • Valoración general
  • Trama
  • Estilo de escritura
  • Gramática y puntuación
¿Te ha resultado útil esta reseña?

bumper

25 capítulos leídos

16 de feb. de 2025

Hot and sexy

"This story was a good and sexy read. A bit strange when the fourth player joined the party, but still a hot and sexy story that could have used at least one more chapter to conclude the story. I have read several stories by this writer and I have enjoyed them all."

  • Valoración general
  • Trama
  • Estilo de escritura
  • Gramática y puntuación
¿Te ha resultado útil esta reseña?

Sejal

24 capítulos leídos

23 de mar. de 2024

Hottttt 🥵

"The ending felt incomplete... Like there was no closure. But nevertheless, the story was awesome. "

  • Valoración general
  • Trama
  • Estilo de escritura
  • Gramática y puntuación
¿Te ha resultado útil esta reseña?

inkitt36

22 capítulos leídos

26 de jul. de 2023

Cam-ping Shelby (with a Jenn)

"Good story that starts as a fantasy, then goes real and ends with lots of unanswer question that could be answered in further chapters. Still a good read with an interesting twist. Have enjoyed previous books by this author."

  • Valoración general
  • Trama
  • Estilo de escritura
  • Gramática y puntuación
¿Te ha resultado útil esta reseña?

Stuart C-West

25 capítulos leídos

13 de feb. de 2023

Good characters

"Really enjoyed this, very believable characters, givers and the takers. Be interesting to see how this continues. Having read most of your books on this site I have to say I like your writing"

  • Valoración general
  • Trama
  • Estilo de escritura
  • Gramática y puntuación
¿Te ha resultado útil esta reseña?

Tracy Perrin Mittleholtz

25 capítulos leídos

20 de sep. de 2022

Bizarre love foresome

"What started out as an interesting fantasy turned a corner really quick with the addition of the 4th player. I personally, was weirded out with that twist. Love is love and all, but I don't think I could be a part of something with that dynamic. Reading that part was a challenge for me. The writing style of this author was one that was easy to read and well described. The spelling and grammar were great. I think there could have been more of an ending. The story just stops with no real conclusion. Maybe the reader is supposed to come.up with their own??? There are lots of unanswered questions. Thanks for sharing."

  • Valoración general
  • Trama
  • Estilo de escritura
  • Gramática y puntuación
¿Te ha resultado útil esta reseña?

funseniorduo

1 capítulos leídos

14 de mar. de 2023

Strange Ending!

"This story started off beautifully, then took a very negative turn, and finally had an ending that made no sense what-so-ever. Very disappointing!"

  • Valoración general
  • Trama
  • Estilo de escritura
  • Gramática y puntuación
¿Te ha resultado útil esta reseña?

Historias de Galatea

Nuevas colecciones

Colecciones populares

Otras colecciones