TRANSCENDED 2

Dena

31 chapitres lus

Enthralling

"While a little choppy at times, grammatically and timeline wise, the author manages to keep the reader engrossed, wondering the outcome of each twist and turn . Eagerly awaiting the conclusion"

  • Évaluation globale
  • Intrigue
  • Style d'écriture
  • Grammaire et ponctuation
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Wanda

21 chapitres lus

Transcended 2

"Ugh I need more! I'm definitely going to be following this story. I love it"

  • Évaluation globale
  • Intrigue
  • Style d'écriture
  • Grammaire et ponctuation
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Bored

31 chapitres lus

Not bad but left unfinished

"The story is not bad but very complicated with so many things happening. I think the slight choppiness is because english is not the writers first language which is ok. The AI only repeats itself a few times and does not do that obnoxious “not this, not that, but this” nonsense. It was left unfinished though. No finality with the owls or witches. "

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  • Style d'écriture
  • Grammaire et ponctuation
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