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The Lost Lucan Queen

"The story was well written with interesting characters. The plot was unique and very imaginative. I loved the idea of the different realms with different cultures and technologies. I would recommend this book to anyone that loves fantasy and engaging themes. "

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this is one the best I've read

"wow talk about imagination I never expected her to be a lost queen when I started out reading it lol "

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Love it

"Loved this story kept me interested until the very end."

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More than 5 stars 🌟 🥰!!!!

"I'm so overjoyed that I came across this story. It was so well written. I'm in awe of the world building any story that includes a map or glossary, I give a chef's kiss. I found it hard to put this book down and when I did, I was constantly thinking about this story. So much so that I lost sleep or didn't sleep at all. It took me 2 1/2 days to complete this story. And you know what.. after giving this review, I think I'm gonna just read it again. It's just so hard to put down. I hope this author's dream comes true because they deserve it. I love stories like this.Where authors breathe life into all the characters, the world, everything that comes with it. Definately would love a sequel, an anime series, a webtoon ...anything I could get my hands on lol.This is just so amazing. My words can't do this book justice alone, frankly It needs a movie 💯🤞🏾🤞🏾"

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Compelling and original

"Very well written story, and an innovative use of multidimensional settings. I was impressed with the realistic outcome on Hadiyya (I'm not going to spoil it here) as well as Charlie's development with Martha and the foster family. I would have liked to have had a slightly longer ending. After the culmination of the "battle", everything wrapped up very quickly and felt quite abrupt. With only a little editing and proofreading, I think this would definitely be worthy of publication. ========= Edits needed: - Incorrect homophones used. Instances where "reign/reigned" have been used should actually be "rein/reined". Reign is used for rulership - "the queen reigns over all." Rein is used with regards to control, as it is derived from handling horses - "giving free rein" for example means letting the horse be in control, "reining in" is taking control back. - Incorrect homophones used. "Feint" should be replaced with "faint". The former is to bluff or employ a decoy. The latter means either a pale impression of something, "a faint smell/a faint stain", or to lose consciousness, "she fainted". There were a couple of other small errors, but they would be picked up during proofreading & copy editing. The ones mentioned above were repeated, so stuck in my mind. "

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The lost Lycan Queen

"I couldn’t stop thinking about the story when I couldn’t read it at times. Had a hard time putting it to sleep as well. Loved the plot and the suspense. I hope you keep writing as I believe every one should enjoy your stories ❤️🤗"

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Refreshing!

"Thank you for your unique style and clean writing thus far. Looking forward to more! Loving the different dimensions. Very enjoyable read."

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The Lost Lycan Queen

"Great story! Good plot, loved the characters. Imaginative read with some great 'life lessons'. Thanks for sharing. "

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Anders spannend

"Es ist ein sehr guter Roman/ gutes Buch. Mal etwas anders aufgebaut, aber nicht weniger spannend. "

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La reine lycan perdu

"J'ai vraiment adoré magnifique histoire bien écrite fascinante palpitante merci beaucoup à l'auteur "

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Thr lost Lykan Queen

"What an amazing story, I have never read a story close to this one, the storyline was incredible 👏"

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Impressive!

"One of the best books I've read in a long time! Such a great plot and Charlie is an incredible character! "

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5/5

"Génial ! J'ai adorée ❤️❤️❤️"

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Brilliant

"Solid writing and managed to capture the reader to continue reading. Very good author. Happy to read all her books."

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One of the best werewolf novels out there!

"Solid story with characters that do not suddenly deviate, no plot holes, excellent writing! Looking forward to more novels from this author! Very well done! 👏🏼 "

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Love it!!

"So far this book has drawn me in and I absolutely love it"

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La reine lycan disparu

"J'ai adoré l'intrigue. L'histoire est génial. Un petit bémol pour les dialogues en anglais lors du combat final. Mais je recommande Carement ce livre "

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Silver moon

"Fantastic read. Gripping and engaging "

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La reine lycan perdue

"Si vous avez l'occasion de lire ce livre et bien ne vous en privez pas. C'est un mélange de fiction ( voyage dans des mondes) et de fantastique. Bien tournée, bien écrit, un bon moment à passer. "

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Absolutely fantastic!

"I really loved the story in its entirety! The character development and plot development was fantastically done. The only downside I can think of is a little bit of editing is needed just to correct some spelling/writing mistake mistakes. Congratulations! I love your work and can’t wait to read some more of your stories!"

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