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Quelle est votre opinion ?

About story

"It was overall a good story . "

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For Blacksmith Brothers

"Great read👏👏"

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Good job!

"What a surprising story. Liked it very much and the spicy scenes were hot"

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For Blacksmith Brothers

"This story has such an interesting plot!!!! I really enjoyed it and will read it again!!!"

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For blacksmith brothers

"Good story.😎😎😎😎"

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For Blacksmith Brothers

"I enjoyed reading this book. Loved everything about it ❤️"

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Wow

"Damn!!!!! You left me speechless! Cool story! "

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Amazing Story

"The best part... a positive story. Nothing Negative... yes the girl is a bit underconfident in the beginning, but she had her reasons... nd in the end she overcomes it all! Great plot, and everything is 5 stars!"

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Amazing Story

"The best part... a positive story. Nothing Negative... yes the girl is a bit underconfident in the beginning, but she had her reasons... nd in the end she overcomes it all! Great plot, and everything is 5 stars!"

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Amazing Story

"The best part... a positive story. Nothing Negative... yes the girl is a bit underconfident in the beginning, but she had her reasons... nd in the end she overcomes it all! Great plot, and everything is 5 stars!"

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For blacksmith brothers

"Really liked this story so far"

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Twice loved

"The book is hot"

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For the Blacksmith Brothers

"Love it, love it, love it 😻 First of many nights I hope...looking forward to reading more."

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Great book!

"I’m captivated by the story plot. I had a hard time putting my phone down. Great book!"

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Mistress

"Loving it….what will Aaron reaction be tonight ?"

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Awesome

"Loved this book!"

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A diffrent type of Harem

"As I have read previous writing of the author, I hoped that this story would be different from typical plots, and she didn't disappoint me in that sense. I quite liked this story even though it was a reverse harem, which even surprised me as well. Overall, this story was a stress reliever for me, as I have read such a story after a long time. "

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Ria2

"Good story. Enjoyed it"

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👏😏 RH, Age gap, spicy and obsessive men. Now that's good stuff 🤌

"The plot, the character everything was beautiful. Love the fact that there was no third party. The men were 😍( Fictional men are always the best) Ah! amazing story, finished it in one sitting. New readers are so lucky 🫶😔 Above all Good work, Highly recommended 👏😚 P.s re-edit it again some words and dialogue were confusing💜"

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Heiß, intensiv,aber noch Potenzial

"Die Geschichte ist super erotisch und heiß. Sowohl in den Charakteren als auch in der Geschichte steckt viel Potenzial, hier hätte deutlich mehr ausgearbeitet werden können, um sowohl mehr Plausibilität in die Geschichte zu bringen als den Charakteren mehr Tiefe zu geben. Zudem wäre der Spannungsbogen dann noch intensiver gewesen. Insgesamt liest es sich meistens flüssig und die bildhafte Darstellung ist sehr heiß. Das hat mir sehr gut gefallen."

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