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Quelle est votre opinion ?

Sweet and caring

"Usually not the characteristics for mafia stories. But this story is different on so many levels. Their dynamics from suspense to deep deep affection is really good. The story is fast paced and easy to read. The mother betrayal was anticipated but well placed. All in all I really loved your story. Thank you ❤️❤️❤️ "

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Great

"Enjoyed reading it"

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Emzi

"I thoroughly enjoyed reading story. It was gripping & intense, unable to put down. Thank you for your work! 🙂👏"

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Short and sweet

"It was good "

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Thanks

"Interesting story, keep it up"

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Thank you

"Thank you for writing this. I am a binge reader and want more thats how much your writing grips me. I will be looking at more of your work. If anyone says your not good do not believe them. Please keep going you have a gift some of us wish we only could hope to have. "

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Yes hott

"Great book"

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daddy's angel

"this story is intriguing an suspeniful its kindda hard to understant because of the characters relationship "

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Really good

"Really good"

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Love it

"I wish there was a continuation of their story, it felt rushed to complete coming down to the end."

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Reina and Adam

"Very fast moving story. Do we get an explanation about Isabella’s kidnapping?"

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Daddy’s angle

"Enjoyed reading this book "

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XXXX

"Would like better info about isabella, was she more of her uncles crew, or the boss, what did she want, why did she leave pretending to be dead. What happened after she attacked Reina, more detail all around. Good book!"

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Could be better

"For a mafia boss.. he's very weak"

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