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Fated to the Alpha
"This is one of those stories you can't stop reading 💖"
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37 chapitres lus
Amazing book!
"I love the plot, it's very suspenseful and I cannot get enough of it! Need more books coz I'm going through this too fast. The one thing I would say is sometimes the he and she's get mixed up and that's kind of confusing but overall, amazing book would 100% recommend it!"
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39 chapitres lus
Fated to the Alpha
"Very good storyline. But there are a lot of grammar mistakes, and the author got mixed up with the characters' sex, jumping from male to female, which was very confusing. But overall not bad"
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42 chapitres lus
Brilliant story
"Really enjoyed reading this book. Very good storyline to it and love story "
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40 chapitres lus
Fated to the alpha
"Kept my interest the entire time I was reading this "
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39 chapitres lus
Worth it!!
"What a story! The ending just makes it all worth while. So many emotions but soooo worth it! Well done!"
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42 chapitres lus
Love it
"Love it from start to end. Maybe just put a name on who ever is talking in the paragraph "
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42 chapitres lus
Fated to the alpha
"What a great and lovely story. Thank you for sharing."
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42 chapitres lus
Fated to the Alpha
"Wonderful story. Going from sadness to fated love. Only to find out her true destiny. In the end Good won over Evil. Her fated mate ended up together forever "
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39 chapitres lus
Amazing story
"This story had me in shock & tears too many times! I’m glad I pushed through with it. There are a few errors when he is used instead of she & vice versa. Or where it states she hugged him back, then he opened up his arms to hug her, so timeline wise it doesn’t make sense. All in all though a really gripping story line to the end"
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27 chapitres lus
Crying
"I'm just lost for words "
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33 chapitres lus
Lanell
"I have enjoyed reading this novel. It has kept me on the edge of seat. Wandering what is going to happen next."
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42 chapitres lus
Cried
"Loved the ending."
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34 chapitres lus
Good Read!
"Great read but it needs to be edited again, there are several time the pronounces get mixed up and the characters names are switched around wrong but overall a good story. "
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33 chapitres lus
Great story !
"This book is badly in need of a good editor. The misuse of pronouns (he/she, him/ her, etc.) along with mixing up the characters names causes confusion and frustration in the reader/ audience and therefore lowering fluidity of the whole storyline."
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42 chapitres lus
Keep writing.
"The storyline was compelling, but the grammar was not good. It was full of misused pronouns, and sentences that were not correctly written. I persevered because the characters and plot was good."
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22 chapitres lus
Fairly good so far
"This book is fairly good I haven't finished it yet but so far I like it."
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40 chapitres lus
Decent Plot
"Plot was good but grammar and punctuation was horrendous and made it difficult to follow. "
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3 chapitres lus
DNF
"Made it through 4 chapters. In understand the plot and have read enough werewolf mate stories to get the point that was attempted but it wasn't written with character development, explanation of the mate process, would switch between perspectives mid chapter, character names were just randomly thrown in there (i/e sam. who is sam, where did come from, why is he calling her bestie). Could have been a good story but writing is amateur. Hopefully with some revision it would be easier to follow and read without frustration. And definitely reduce the number of times the word slay was used the first 4 chapters. "
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34 chapitres lus
Need to be i my prove
"Sometimes was confuse to know who is talking, it is like you finish one line about her and mix with him and sometimes I have read again for to understand. The idea is good. The writer should be improve. "
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