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Quelle est votre opinion ?

C'était magnifique

"Juste magnifique "

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Mafia

"Das Buch ist spannend und gleichzeitig witzig geschrieben. Die Charaktere sind toll beschrieben. Ich kann dieses Buch jedem empfehlen und ich habe diese positive Bewertung abgegeben weil es einfach gesagt super geschrieben ist."

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Eternal love

"It was realistic filled with so many emotions I will recommend this to those who like sad endings "

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Dieser Roman ist genial

"Mir fehlen ein wenig die Worte. Der Roman beinhaltet viele verschiedene Gefühle. In einem Moment ernst, im nächsten komisch und dann möchte man los heulen. Es hat alles was eine gute Story braucht "

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Zamil et Ayat

"Très belle histoire hâte de lire la suite "

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Me atrapó 😊

"Me gusta mucho la trama, el ambiente y los lugares donde se desenvuelve la historia"

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Heartstealer

"Everything the way of presenting and it just can't be explain bye words it is supercalifragisticexpiladocious"

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STORY REVIEW

"I lvoed the story just the best i ever found on inkitt i think u should do more the way he feell in love of ayat is amazing can u plsss do another one likethis but better ending"

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Mafia

"Loved it.......No words to describe how much I like this story."

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I love it

"Not the usual mafia book. C'est juste captivant, les personnages, l'histoire.....vraiment j'aime beaucoup❤️❤️❤️."

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Hi!!!

"More chapters please!!! 😩😭"

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🙂💔

"I just literally cry but I hate the fact that you give us happy ending but you choose to make us cry 🙂💔thr ending we never want "

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hey

"Hello I just wanted to sincerely say how much I enjoyed your story. It didn’t just read well it played out like a movie in my mind. I truly respect your storytelling and creative vision. As a paid artist who brings stories to life through comics, manga, and animation-style artwork, your story feels like one of those rare gems that deserve to be seen, not just read. It has the kind of depth and cinematic quality that’s made for a visual experience. If you’re open to the idea of a visual adaptation, I would be genuinely excited to collaborate with you and help transform your words into something stunning and unforgettable. You can take a look at my portfolio to get an idea of my professionalism. I'm super excited and genuinely interested in working with you. Instagram: kyslucas Discord: lucasarts Twitter/X: lucasarts970054 tumblr :@lucasarts99"

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Can't wait for next chapter 😁😁😁

"This story has me hooked! The emotions, the characters… everything! Please don’t keep us waiting too long 🥹🫶💖"

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This book is wow the way she used to tell us we can clearly imagine everything it's actually a really good book honestly I enjoyed it a lot the she describes everything and the girl she knows how to respect his husband is so good really good

"This book is wow the way she used to tell us we can clearly imagine everything it's actually a really good book honestly I enjoyed it a lot the way she describes everything and the girl she knows how to respect his husband is so good. And also the Mafia man I love it I can literally make his photo in my mind 😜"

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Mafia

"A compelling story hope the two will make their marriage work."

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Such a rollercoaster

"The book immediately started with an interesting scene that pulled me into the world of the character. A few paragraphs later I was permanently hooked. The action in this story is great and I can't wait to read more once more chapters come out. One thing to watch out for is the MC using overly casual language while dealing with something VERY intense. I don't think I'd be saying that honestly. Overall, wonderful!"

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Everything in this novel is fantastic I really love it. I never read a novel like this but now when I read them I lost my mind I mean this is insane..... very good best novel I read in this plot ✨️💗

"I like everything in this novel but I don't like name Umar in this novel I'm Muslim shia and I hate Ahelaybait enemies "

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It's story is kinda boring and don't build interest to read. Hope you don't mind but it is what is it is.

"I don't like the story its too I bland. Recommend to those who are under 18"

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