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Mommetke
"Awesome story"
The hunter
"Wow extremely well done an amazing story not long but packed with action and emotion Really well done thanks for a great read "
Wild
"Amazing and heart wrenching. The internal battle is profound and bittersweet. The characters are strong and beautiful. I loved the back and forth with a welcome ending."
Good
"It's good book I like it it's really descriptive I'm glad I'm reading it"
The Hunter
"What a refreshing and amazing read.Well written and intriguing I just had to read it in one sitting...please keep on writing🥰🥰"
Nice, nice
"Short beautiful story! "
Devastatingly beautiful
"Magnificent writing. Everything is detailed and with such emotion. I've had to give myself breaks every couple chapters because of how heavy the story is. It's a good thing cause it made me reflect as the journey progressed. Fantastic job, it's set up to continue the journey if the author ever wishes. "
The Hunter
"I thoroughly enjoyed “The Hunter”. I found the main characters compelling and the conflict between them more than plausible given the setting. Actually, I was drawn into the story so much I read it in one sitting. Cian has a very male presence as an alpha should, with authority when it is needed and tenderness and even vulnerability in intimate moments making him an easily liked hero. He is not perfect however as the story will reveal. Aisling consumed with grief and a desire for revenge gets caught in a series of events that changes her life. As an Irish woman she fight it every step of the way. Suggestions - scenes involving the scent of primary characters probably don’t need the repetition they are given. Those scents after their introduction can be described in ways similar to the following: Cian’s familiar scent filled the room, carried on the breeze, overpowered her senses, etc. Using varying phrases help break up the same description every time. This novella is really the foundation for a much larger story arc if the author wanted to develop it. The details about herbs and their uses developed a secondary character very well and gave the story the feeling of being lore. The village’s age and age of the castle suggest a long history. What happens next in the story with this vow between lovers from different backgrounds? Does Maive ever forgive Cian? How does Aisling learn about and adjust to pack life? Does she ever mark Cian? Is she accepted as pack Luna? Does the pack move back to Ireland permanently? How is the rogue problem dealt with if they do move back? What happens with the villagers recently changed? I mean, the questions go on and on. "
The Hunter
"Absolutely love this book. Writing skill is excellent. A good read"
Elegant Twist on Werewolf Storytelling
" Vivid storytelling with a plot that is both powerful and immersive. All the characters have their own strengths and flaws. Not one of them perfect or innocent and that is what makes this such a great story. Giving this story a read allows you to step back in time and see that in ancient Ireland myths felt very real and those stories are still passed down. Many cultures have proficiencies about the seventh son or daughter and this story made me recall stories told by my aunties and grandmama. Thank you author for sharing your talent and time with us! I loved the book and I am certain that I felt echoes of all the wolfhounds I grew up with when reading the book. See you in the next story! ♥️"
The Hunter
" Very well written. Captivating from the first paragraph. Absolutely loved this story."
The hunter
"Great story. Different, but nice."
Wow
"Slow to start, too much distracting prose. It took me a couple of days to get through the first chapters. A few confusing incidents like , how did they stay to dance, how did she know his name ? The story now is pretty good and descriptions have pulled me in. "
The Hunter
"I really enjoyed this story. It gave a new perspective to the regular basic werewolf stories. However, I feel like there could of been a lot more to this story. Like it just ended abruptly and I was left with unanswered questions. Would like a part two. "
The hunter
"I’m happy to have found this story. I enjoyed the plot and the characters. There’s a bit of mystery and action with some spicy scenes. It’s well written for it’s short pages. I could see a trilogy here. Her sisters story, tied to a story of her brothers family after what happened. I haven’t checked if that’s already a thing, but I will definitely be interested to read other works by this author. "
Wolf by force
"The story is quite original . It needs to add depth to the character s. The descreptionbare alright. The reaction of the characters need analysis "
Not a full length story.
"I have been reading this story since it was first added. It's a wonderful story, buuuuut I was expecting a full-length storyline and not a novella. I am bummed out that there isn't more. I do feel short-changed. "
The hunter
"Captivating story, elaborately described characters and scenery. An immersive novel. Well done! Looking out for more of your work."
The Hunter
"Really enjoyed ☺ this story, hard to put down. Thanks 😊 for sharing your talents with us. "
Creative concept
"Hi Author, I have read your poem, and I really liked it. You have defined each character very well, and you have kept your work in such a way that it stands out. You could become an even better writer by continuing in this direction. It would be an honor for me if I could work with you as well. I am a commission artist, and I have worked on a lot of character art and book covers. If you think it's a good fit, I would love to create something for you as well. Discord: lilyjackson0295 Instagram: lily.jackson321 Here is the few socials i mentioned you can be in touch with me in here, if you prefer any other social for chat so kindly let me know. Thank you for the consideration. "
