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THE LOST ALPHA'S MATE

"Like you said, real slow burn. Natalie and Silas are awesome characters ♥️! Strong and commited too one another though takes a while for them to act. I'm glad she finally had powers to fight though I was waiting for her to turn into werewolf with enhanced powers. Didn't like that bite/power pulls her to vamp Master. Hope she fights it with Silas' help. Can't wait for sequel! Thank you! 🌺🤙🌺"

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The lost wolf

"This book is gripping. It holds your attention and draws ypu in. Ypu get invested in the characters. Ypu can't stop reading."

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The Alfa 's lost mate

"Enjoyed this something different thanks "

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Page Flipper!!

"The writing keeps you reading. It leads you deeper until Your hooked!"

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The list alphas mate

"Interesting so far. Cannot wait to find out what Natalie s powers really are"

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interesting

"It had me hooked from the first chapter. Really nice work. I love the writing, the plot, and Natalie is my favourite!!! I hate the ending!!!! I don’t want her to be with the vampires "

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I love it!

"I relly love the story🤍"

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Interesting

"I usually do not write review because my English but this story was extremely good. I love the plot the idea and the characters! I love Silas!!! He’s my favorite and Vivienne odd enough. There were some slow parts to the story but everything else kept me interested and I was still reading! I truly enjoy this and I know I’m new and late to the party but I’ll be reading the last book! Author I really hope u right more stories!!! I’ll continue to read them! "

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Needs a lot of editing

"This is a haunting story. It could be a good novel but there are many problems. Repeated sentences, too many similies/metaphors, over descriptions. I kept reading hoping for explanations. They came, but it didn’t make sense. Please have someone read this and help you with the editing. "

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Intriguing

"Very slow. Too much beautiful detail, less would be more effective. Story good but very similar to Twilight. Needs to move the story along now or I will get bored and give up reading."

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