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Quelle est votre opinion ?

De rechazada por todos a Luna

"Me gusta mucho todo hasta el momento. Por eso recomiendo a todos los amantes de historias de hombres lobos que deberian de leerlo,esta muy bueno. "

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Great Story

"Loved the story...definitely cam from a different perspective than most werewolf stories...liked the different perspective💖💜🥰 My only criticism is that the MFC...didn’t have a name...it would have ßeen nice if she could have ßeen given a name🤔 Other than that it was a great romance werewolf story💖💜🥰"

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Amazing resilience

"A beautiful story. The beginning is really sad and tragic. Bit strange, that nobody realised the abuse. But the real brave turn, when she finally asks for help and she finds not just that. But everything she could never dream of. An awesome story about strength, resilience, hope and love. 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻"

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Perfect

"Beautiful read, didn't put it down til I completed it. "

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Merci

"Merci pour cette histoire 😘 "

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Great story

"Good story, just wished it was longer. "

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How do you describe the emotions

"The tragic events that poor girl went through growing up are horrific. Twisted people got what they deserved... their ending. The story ended peacefully, however emotionally it was somewhat painful knowing our protagonist was still living with the remaining memories of her childhood trauma. I hope for a sequel to tell the story of the next generation that has magic. "

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Identicalxtwin alphas and silver shackles

"Excellent story. Captivating from the start. There were shocking scenes, heartwarming ones, spicy ones, emotional as well as funny ones. All in 1 story. Well written "

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Nice Read

"Dear Author, you wrote a wonderful book. I am impressed that this was your first book and look forward to more from you. It is a heartwarming story and I loved all the characters. There are lots of possibilities for sequels so you better start writing!"

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Love

"Im so glad it all worked out for her"

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👍 Great book!

"Great book. Loved the characters and the plot. Would have liked to know more of why her mother hated her so much. I look forward to reading more of your books "

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Wonderful Cinderella shifter story

"I loved this story. Would have preferred to have chapter headings and be titled with the characters POV. Paragraphs were long, breaks would have helped readability. Great story."

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Review

"This is my own book but I'm stuck on the last chapter and it won't let my view the other chapters as a reader on mobile which is my only way to see reactions, please sent help and thank you for reading "

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Parents are whack

"Parents are crazy. Hope they get what the deserve"

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Belle lecture

"Bon texte facile à lire adoré "

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Die identischen Zwillingeudie silbetne Handfessel

"Warum ist ab Kapittel 25 alles in englischer Sprache? "

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Nice read

"I enjoyed this story. It had an interesting story and characters but just needs the pace slowed down a bit to allow the scenes, stories and characters to be developed more fully. I felt like it just glosses over everything and while it’s a nice story, it could have been so much more "

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Interesting story

"Very interesting story. Characters are good, but there is an almost 2D quality to most. They are written out as though you were info dumping about them instead of making them & their history part of the story. The pacing is fast, and that doesn't leave a lot of time, but it also leaves a lot of holes."

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Had a stronger start...but

"Had a stronger start, but lost traction for me when it came to how the plot carried on. It felt like some more story building was needed at certain points. Two story points that were questionable: - Guards were mentioned but ended up seeming useless - No action was taken on her "family" sooner. The end result seemed flat/brushed off, after all they had to own up for. "

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