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Not bad

"Decent story. Good plot. Good ending except it would have been nice for the people to remember correctly. There are a few spots where it tells you a scene then tells you the sane scene but a little different right after. Otherwise not bad. "

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Interesting story of a sea god

"Every good story starts somewhere, so a poor red haired girl being sacrificed is a good beginning. I enjoyed the storyline "

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5star

"Giving myself 5star review, why not 😂 Just enjoy the sweet story between Maris and the man who loves her "

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Quick read, simple with spice

"Worth a read. Needs a small bit of editing but only minor. Plot was ok. Liked the ending. Would have liked to hear more about the palace and underwater kingdom but as it’s a short story, understandable that there are limits on what you can include."

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