7 chapitres lus
"You have written the story nicely, But somewhere the patch work seems to be required, and also little connectivity is lacking. Otherwise overall the story is perfectly blended, high written language. Also, just a suggestion, can write more chapters showing the future, or more romantic moments between."
2 chapitres lus
"This narrative offers a compelling exploration of deep-seated desire, lust and the complexities of human attraction. From their first encounter, the connection between the characters is depicted with a magnetic intensity, illustrating a profound longing that is both transformative and all-encompassing. The writing captures the subtleties of shared emotional and physical pull with masterful detail, rendering every glance and interaction with evocative precision. For those seeking a story that is as intellectually engaging as it is emotionally charged, this work is a captivating triumph. The prose is truly arresting, drawing the reader into the characters' inner worlds with every page."