Quelle est votre opinion ?
Well interesting but ...
"The writing is good lots of descriptions so you can picture this world. Lots of emotions, so the story flows with each chapter you wait for the answers in the next. Over all a good read the ending could have used an epilogue telling us what happened to the evil alpha and his daughter. "
Good storyline
"It seems as though the author may not have English as a first language and some things just do not translate right. It does need to be edited heavily as some things just don't make sense characters names are changed things need to be fixed definitely. That being said the storyline itself was good different but in a good way. I was disappointed in the ending though I thought it could have been drawn out for another chapter at least to give it some closure more otherwise good easy read fast and cute not spicy at all though."
Errors
"Too many errors kept cropping up. Like not knowing the name of the heroine or the villainess. Word choices that were just wrong. Not misspelled...just wrong. I couldn’t enjoy Lyka’s story. I wanted to. "
