Quelle est votre opinion ?
Aethelgard: Erwachen der Schatten
"Tolle Handlung und genial geschrieben.Der Kampf um Liebe und Daseinsrecht. Freue mich auf 2. TEIL"
Great read
"This is a great read. The plot is spicy but emotional. Awesome character development with vivid imagery. "
👍👍👍👍
"Je n'ai que quelques mots à dire J'AI ADORÉ.... A quand la suite "
Libro de aventuras genial
"Aún lo estoy leyendo, pero de momento me está encantando, no conocía esta aplicación, me parece fantástica la colaboración entre autor y lectores"
Hybrid
"Brilliant woman empowered story with spicy 🔥 sections. Well done, certainly worth a read"
Histoire fascinante
"L'intrigue est passionante."
Histoire fascinante
"L'intrigue est passionante."
WOW!! That was intense!
"I want more but not just the sex. I want to learn more about the characters. All of them. I want a more thorough story though. The plot could us something more than just raw sex. I want context with it. Conflict, resolution, and depth. "
Aethelgard
"Love the characters, and the story was very well thought out. I always hate the to be continued part. Lol I can't wait for the next story of Kami."
I need more of this awesomeness!
"This was a pretty awesome story and I look forward to seeing how it unfolds in the next book. I love how she grows in her strength and support of her mates and friends. I recommend this book. "
Couldn’t put it down
"Well written, thoroughly enjoyed!"
Hybrid shifter
"She glows and has power. A hybrid shifter who is demon and dragon with power others want. More please as this ends in cliffhanger."
Enjoying this
"Not read anythi g similar to this before. I'm enjoying it"
Belle histoire
"Histoire passionnante belle intrigue et personnages émouvants "
Rushed but good. I hope you have a book 2 to fill all gaps
"The beginning drew me in. The middle forced me to use my imagination to account for gaps and plot holes like who was her mum. How does she still have a human phone, who is her dad? When exactly did she lose her v card? She seemed way to experienced for what she did with Teton and Caspian. Did I miss when she was made to feel less than? The only people that did that were the mean girls and that happened twice. The second time she whooped them silly. Everyone else just showed curiosity not real animosity Etc., the end left me unsatisfied. I hope your new book goes into more detail because I think you have a gift for writing. It just felt super rushed at some points, like you were in a hurry to get to the end."
Aethelgard
"Despite rating is so lowly I did genuinely like the story, I think there is potential. But I also believe that this book was sloppy. I believe that this book could do with some organization and planning, there also should be some actual plot built out. At no point in the whole story did I see how a conflict, other than jealous girls, could impact the story because there were no subtle hints or foreshadowing. Consistency is also a major flaw, like having major details like her heritage or what she even was dropped so casually in conversation despite never actually taking about it and only mentioning it, the name of one of the major love interests switching out abruptly, also for a "panicked, weak, human girl" she doesn't seem to care about her family or the life she left behind. Not ONCE did I see her even mention her mother after she talked about her birthday. on the flip side I also believe that there isn't enough diversity in the dialogue, I noticed that a lot of phrases were recycled and conversations didn't feel entirely authentic. I would have liked to see more about the background of literally any character, even the main character, although that may be mentioned more thoroughly in the next book. All in all, I hope that you, the author, maps out the direction the story is supposed to go and make the characters feel more fleshed out. As a writer myself I understand this may feel like a hefty challenge but this is a great step towards becoming a better storyteller. I hope that you don't take my criticism roughly, I only mean to help you make a more well rounded story. "
