Quelle est votre opinion ?
Enjoyed your book
"I really enjoyed your book, it was awsome that you updated regularly. Keep writing, you did a great job with the story "
Good
"Overall the story and plot is good. Captivating, hard to put down. There are minor things like repetitions or gaps (the first kiss that almost happened but then later said it did happen) that need some clarity. Would’ve been nice to get a back story or lead in to the new rig as well. Seems things just show up without warning-totally fine- personal preference. "
I need more!
"It’s a great storyline. Not only that, I really like it when I can go for a trip across the country, and even read about actual places in my home state. Anyway, I will say, it needs editing, but that’s a given no matter what book I read. I only have 2 complaints. First, I’d say that the chapters could be shorter. They’re just really long and a few seemed that they could have been broken down into shorter chapters. Lastly, I need more. You gave me too much information on things to look forward to but ended before the story ever got there. In my mind, chapter 34 was not the epilogue. The next chapter should be your epilogue, a few months or even a year or so down the road. I want to know more about the sprawling ranch in Cody, marriage, babies, the whole nine yards. I really think there is more to round out the end of this story. I am in no way saying that this is a bad story, I just feel invested in it. In the words of a wise old man, I need “the rest of the story”."
Great story!
" I love this book so far! There are a couple spelling and grammatical errors, but otherwise it it great. In the beginning it was kind of confusing because you got the different point of views but you were reading the exact same dialogue and story. I can’t wait to finish it! "
