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Quelle est votre opinion ?

La luna olvidada

"Es muy entretenida, me ha gustado mucho "

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Missing Mate

"Well, you have a new fan here, this book was remarkable 👏 loved the story so much, I'll definitely will be reading more from you 🔥"

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Adorei

"Parabéns a autora, a história é muito criativa e bem construída, só senti falta de talvez uma pequena amostra de como seria a vida dos dois. "

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The missing Luna (loved it)

"really enjoyed this book and found the plot refreshing and engaging, especially compared to typical stories in this genre. The storyline kept me invested from beginning to end, and I gave the plot and characters a full 5 stars because they were well developed and emotionally compelling. The writing style was good overall, though at times I found the narration a bit inconsistent, especially when it shifted between perspectives. This occasionally made it a little difficult to stay fully immersed, which is why I rated grammar and punctuation 4 stars instead of 5. Despite that, I genuinely enjoyed the story and even found myself skipping ahead just to see what would happen next with certain characters. Overall, it’s a strong and creative book with a lot of potential, and I really appreciated the emotional depth and character outcomes. I’d definitely recommend it to readers who enjoy intense, character-driven fantasy romance stories."

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Such a great story!

"Great story. Great characters. "

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Loved!

"This was a great read. I would love to hear more of their story."

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Enjoyable

"Well written and thoroughly enjoyable story."

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An enjoyable book.

"A fantasy in an olde world where there is love and loss, pride and spite, chance and lost opportunity. The characters are warm but would benefit from a little more depth. A good story, well written, with good spelling and grammar. This could be developed into something spectacular. To the Author - Thank you for the book and please keep writing."

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