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Quelle est votre opinion ?

Pulled me in!

"Really enjoy the plot, pacing to description be situations, relatability of the characters Nervous as to what plot twists are ahead but I feel invested in the main characters! Fabulous job this far (ch 19)"

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Hope is this

"This is an endearing and heartfelt story. The love story told feels real and genuinely brought tears to my eyes. Thanks for giving me hope in the end."

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the acquisition

"i like the topic discussed. as expected this age of AI’s"

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Impressive

"Very.Pleasantly.Surprised. The banter between characters is excellent. Character development is good. The story is well written and pulls the reader in. Lucien is a mixture of Elon Musk and Tony Stark which in itself takes sill. Good job. Good read!"

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The Acquisition

"🧬🔬🔭🧪🪐🚀💰 "

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Touching

"Thanks for this story way deeper than the pitch could let imagine."

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The acquisition

"Liked the general attempt at a world most know nothing about. He was not a believable character though, modelled on Elon Musk but far cleverer than musk. Ended lamely, a tasteful seduction, presumably by her, would have fitted."

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Interesting story

"An interesting read"

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