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"Well i can give review so why not 😉"

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A slow burn that earns it

"It starts as a familiar premise, a powerful CEO and his secretary with a complicated past, and slowly becomes something much more layered than that. What sets it apart is that the tension never relies on misunderstandings or manufactured drama. Every obstacle between Rowan and Lana is earned, specific, and rooted in real consequences. Rowan is a well-constructed male lead. His control isn't just a personality trait, it's a survival mechanism, and watching it crack slowly over thirty chapters feels completely believable. Lana grows equally well. By the end she isn't reacting to him anymore. She's standing beside him, and that shift feels genuinely earned. The thriller subplot elevates the story above most romance fiction. Dmitri is a genuinely unsettling antagonist precisely because he stays offscreen for so long, and the revelation that his power was built on manufactured fear rather than real omniscience is one of the smartest plot turns in the story."

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Love this book 🩷🩷

"The best part was the ending, very emotional, tears were definitely shed. Thank you for this great book. Good luck!! "

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I never looked up to anyone more.

"I loved this novel and was so happy the author decided to finish the book. I can say I look up to the Author just by being a new young Author. I do read all chapters and even comments when I review. That being said, I saw the AI comment where I see the suspicion, but the more you read, you see it’s just a writing style, and it’s all handwritten. I did have a bunch of questions the book did end up answering so I love how well it was written to do that so flawlessly I would love to know how the author posts so regularly and maybe some tips on how to be able to do that myself. The smut was added in so tastefully, as well as the plot being more of a monopoly/mafia vibe that was so refreshing compared to the stereotypical CEO style novels, and how the characters blend so nicely with each other What I would like to see is more world-building. 10/10 5 stars I will be making a post so my followers can also see this! "

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Good story

"The CEO might be obsessed with her, but the reader will be obsessed with this story and author. Keep up the good work!"

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Feedback

"Amazing work I loved this book so much Willing to read more stories from author "

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Love it

"It was a lovely short story story to read. Can’t wait to read more from you "

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A good read!

"I enjoyed this book overall. The story was engaging, and the author did a great job maintaining suspense throughout. The pacing kept me interested, and I was eager to find out what would happen next. But the book felt a little too short for the story it was trying to tell. Just as I became fully invested in the characters and plot, it seemed to end much sooner than expected. The premise had a lot of potential, and I would have loved to see the author explore it in greater depth with more character development and world-building. It was an enjoyable read with strong storytelling and enough mystery to keep the pages turning. I only wish there had been more of it."

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Nice plot

"This novel could be so much more, it is still ok to read though"

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I love it 🥰!!

"I like the plot it’s really nice and it really fits the title plus I loved the dialogue , this story is a perfect mix of dark , and enemies to lovers romance , everything unfolds perfectly.z"

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Love it

"I love the way the two forbid themselves to get closer to one another, although they are absolutely dying of lust and desire. Can’t wait to see what happened in their dark and twisted past."

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“Obsession, Chemistry & Second Chances ✨”

"The chemistry, obsession, and past misunderstanding trope is the best part already 😭✨"

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Awesome start

"It was amazing start and would love to read more"

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Exciting

"As a person who loves dark romance. This story give the feeling that it gonna get more exciting and interesting. I love the way it has started "

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Was Obsessed tooo

"Was Good... Well done, All the best"

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Amazingly written 💕

"Toooooo goooood to read ......😘😘😘😘😘🤩🤩🤩😘😘😘😘😭egarly waiting for more chapterS "

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An excellent prologue to a great story

"The story, although short, is quickly captivating. Keep up the good work. Introduce ambiguous imagery and create unusual scenes to show the sparks. "

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Amazing stuff

"Damn girl, the suspense , the want, that's crazy Amazing work "

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I loved the way you started the story and ended it and the concept is very beautiful . Keep it up

"I loved the way you started the story and ended it and the concept is very beautiful . Keep it up"

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"What an interesting plot it is . That's one of my favourites. Keep it up girl . That's really awesome "

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