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Beautiful

"What a gem of a book. Your writing is impeccable, detailed to the bone. I am hooked. "

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🎶 Another Day Older and Deeper in Debt 🎶

"Nervous but determined Maya Reyes can hardly believe her ears when she is read the will by Dante's lawyer. She is now to become the property of Dante Vance for him to do with whatever he wishes? "Impossible!" Maya exclaims. But her father's debt remains unpaid. Maya has little choice except to become the martial slave of Dante the Mafia king. Dante is initially pleased with the little bird he has finally captured. He has not yet decided if he would marry her. Either way she would never be anything more to him than a house maid. He would ignore her beautiful but pleading dark eyes, her shapely lips. But as Dante moves Maya into more and more extravagant 'cages' inside his luxurious home, he wonders if the trap he has set has in reality made him a prisoner of her love after all. This is a familiar story of 'Beauty and the Beast' but Zesty Tech tells it well, causing us to care for the plight of Maya and to become properly disgusted with Dante's beastly ways. (His nickname for her is 'Little Debt') I like how Zesty cleverly switches between Maya's view point and Dante's so we get both perspectives on their bizarre relationship. A charming re-telling of the 🎶Tale Old as Time.🎶 "

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I would buy this

"I love the plot. I like the characters. A few minor edits and some filler to the story. The writing it really well done. "

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