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Very Nice

"I like the banter between Aldrich and Lucy. She’s sassy and kind. He’s vulnerable and strong. There’s a verisimilitude in the way that they relate. And when he came looking for her, she didn’t shrink. Bravo! "

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Monster’s second chance

"A well written story as always, HEA guaranteed. A determined FMC and a troubled MMC, you will just love them. "

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Shocking

"True romance is written in the choices we make. Despite pain. Despite belief. Despite knowledge. True romance is the choice we make to place it above the rest. Beautiful story."

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Romantic but...

"I truly loved this story. It had you on the edge of your seat at some point and you felt the love of a blossoming romance but I’m disappointed about the ending. There was more of the story that could’ve been explored, like the enemy get a really good ending of his own and well deserved and I really would’ve loved to see a ceremony between them (marriage as well), them have a baby and just a glimpse of Aldric as a father since he never got to experience that the first time around. Other than that I give it a 3 out of 5 stars and I really do recommend reading this story. Except for the ending it was fantastic ⭐️⭐️⭐️. "

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I loved this story!

"Yes, there could’ve been more drama. But there are plenty of high drama stories out there. I loved this story just as it is. Two hurt & damaged people funding happiness! ❤️"

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Second chance mate is perfect

"Textbook slow burn. Some unexpectedly funny moments, and an excellent story. Even a bit of a mystery, hard to put down once I’d started. Hard not to fall for Alaric, who is a surprisingly endearing ‘monster’. Really enjoyed this story! "

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Monster's second chance

"Well it's ended his second chance at a normal life and second chance mate, the story is wonderful and I loved every single chapter and can't wait to see what will happen between them ❤️"

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Good story

"I enjoy the strength the Fl and ML display. I like that the pain that they're dealing with is not igored. I also like seeing character development and maturity. "

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Monster's Second Chance

"This is a wonderful story. I love the writing style and am fully invested in the bond between Aldric and Lucy. I look forward to each chapter as it is added. "

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I always find it so pleasurable to discover in a writer's ability

" I always find it so pleasurable to discover in a writer's ability to describe the character's thought processes, with such nuanced language, that whilst enhancing my understanding of the depth of the characters and their motivations, also manages to allow me to gain insight into the writer herself. The author B.E .Harmel surely shows herself to be a highly creative author, capable of both the very broadest strokes of atmospheric physical scenes right down to the very finest details of the characters interactions and emotional nuances. Thank you 🙏🏽"

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Monster’s Second Chance

"Enjoyed reading this story so much. A must read story. Thank you B E Harmel for writing this story."

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Aldrich and Lucy

"I love that the love is already below the surface. I love the building of that awareness through the intricate weaving of words. A talented writer. Much respect. 🥰"

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Monster's second chance

"Its great to see their love and respect for each other. This is a good happy ending"

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The monsters second chance

"I loved this book especially the ending something different The story was about the monsters second chance not a revenge story so I found the ending appropriate"

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Second Chance

"This is a satisfying HEA with no unnecessary drama. My only issue is the dialogue. There aren't many conversations per se. Most interactions are limited to curt brief statements and responses. "

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Mated

"Real quick read fast paced with good characters and good ideas to string story together stops at chapter seven to rate but rating systems don't work so you lose rest of story"

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Intelligent writing and I'm all for it!

"Most of my close friends. > You've kept my interest as a reader, thoroughly sustained with the depth of emotional and detailed character information and especially the main character's internal struggles as she navigates her personal and professional goals. I would have preferred some defined dialogue between the other hidden character: her own wolf and the heroine to make use of the full impact of the potential second chance mate be more vibrant and life changing! As such I offer this comment as a respectful suggestion Ms Harmel? 🌹"

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