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Stubborn mates
"Love this book the authors really good at writing! "
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Aspen
"I love the story so far,interesting to find out what will happen next "
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Amazing
"Love the story!! The grammar and punctuations need a little work; but nothing I couldn’t overlook. The plot is great, it polled me in on the first chapter."
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Love the story
"Loving this story "
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Ryker
"This is soo good! So glad they're finally starting to get along"
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Stubborn Mates
"Great story cant wait for updates. So excited to know what happens. It cant end like that. "
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Wow!
"I’m not usually one for werewolf stories but this presented a unique twist on the genre that I appreciated. The character descriptions are great and give me a clear idea of what they look like, and the writing style is easy to follow and flows well. I would suggest going back and checking your grammar in a few spots, but nothing major. Overall good job! :) "
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Love it!!!
"I can't wait to read more. "
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Drawn in
"This seems to be off to a great start. So excited to see this story through! The main characters are great so far, and the plot is great. Read all of this so far in one setting and ready for more! "
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Stubborn Mates
"It’s a very interesting story, reminds me of a cross between Men in black with M19 and the fifth element with the hover cars. Overall it’s very enjoyable and very interesting I enjoyed reading the first chapter, just two suggestions separate your characters when they are having a conversation it’s puzzling when you put it all together. Second check your grammar and spelling ... you have a great story here developing good luck 👍🏻🍀"
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Good Start
"I like the idea of the story, and I like that you've put enough of a twist on it to make the "mates don't like each other at first but then do" a unique idea; since a lot of werewolf stories I see like that don't have much else to the plot besides that. There were a couple of issues I noticed. Firstly, I think you should have actual chapter names rather than having them named after whose POV it is (you can just put that in bold at the top of the chapter when the POV switches), because having a chapter name is something that is important when publishing a book and for people to have just a little teaser of what that chapter will be about before they read it. Also, as far as style goes, you write a lot in the past tense when the story is occurring in the present, so I think it'd be beneficial to go back and change those verbs to be present rather than past tense. Also, some of your paragraphs can get a little long, so it would be a good idea to break some of them up into two or just shorten a few of them of anything unnecessary just for aesthetic/readability purposes. All in all, good work!"
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Alpha's Mate
"The story line is good. It drags out a little and the Grammer is readable but could be better. Proof reading is everything."
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