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Quelle est votre opinion ?

Kisa

"Die Geschichte hat mir gefallen, es ließt sich leicht. Ich hatte allerdings bei der Story das Gefühl, ich sitze in einer Rakete! Alles ging so wahnsinnig schnell, man kam kaum mit. Leider fehlte mir dadurch ein wenig die Tiefe in der Story. Aber das ist wirklich nur ein kleiner Teil. Das Lesen lohnt sich auf jeden Fall!"

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LOVELY, SWEET

"This couple's connection is sweet, supportive and kind. Second chance love is the best "

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Liebenswert

" Ich liebe diese Geschichte. Du hast wirklich was wunderschönes geschrieben, so lebendig und herzlich, danke dafür. love this story. You've written something truly beautiful, so vivid and heartfelt, thank you for that."

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J'ai adore

"Superb histoire leur amour et trop touchante et j'adore leur fille sappel comme moi sarah"

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Amazing

"I loved this story so much! If only we all could find someone so perfect. "

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Really great!

"I loved the sweet and spice of this, even the bit of suspense! Great read! "

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Eye Candy

"Oh wow, another awesome story. Just incredible ❤️"

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Great love story

"This story was incredible! I finished in less than two days because I just couldn't put it down. I can't wait to read more from the author!"

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Great short novel

"This is a spicy short Novela which is great for an afternoon read. The main characters are likeable and there is a and there is minimal grammatical errors. I felt that the characters had strong voices and it was easy to picture them inside my head. Well worth read."

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Hddjd

"Jfjfbddjbr rhrrbbbrhbrhrurbrbrbhrrbbrhrbr rrbrbf. F f f. Ft. Tbrrhr"

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Appreication And Commission Request!!

"Hi! I’m Aliana, a professional comic & Webtoon artist, and I loved your story on Inkitt. Your cinematic storytelling and vivid scenes inspired me to reach out. I’d love to adapt your work into a visually striking comic for Webtoon, Tapas, or indie platforms. With expertise in pacing, paneling, and character design, I can bring your vision to life. You’ll keep full creative input and credit throughout the process. I’m open to both short projects and long term series with flexible budget options. Let’s connect on Discord: aliana_jordan I’d love to collaborate!"

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Eye Candy

"Oh wow thank you author for such a beautiful story 💕 I could not stop reading it 🔥 the love and relationship was wonderful… thank you "

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Eye Candy

"This was truly a beautiful, beautiful love story I really enjoyed this book!!! Fantastic writing!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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Eu candy wow

"I sure enjoyed reading this love story about two people finding each other and forming a bind and love regardless of age differences. Thank you to the author for writing this story. And what an ending with the surprise of having twins."

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Bhgchvvh

"Hhahgavah jshchbahheb hwhhs have shsbs g. Abb av. Hmavwiwb jakaci jk wysn kkwbwh ahgbwj isvwj jw xanis yabwni"

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Bhgchvvh

"Hhahgavah jshchbahheb hwhhs have shsbs g. Abb av. Hmavwiwb jakaci jk wysn kkwbwh ahgbwj isvwj jw xanis yabwni"

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Kristen Cope

"What a wonderful story! Absolutely loved it! Well done Author!"

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Eye candy

"Great story enjoyed it from start th finish. Characters are well thought although I would have liked to know how the best friend worked out, maybe another book?"

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Very passionate love story

"Beautifully written, great characters and extra spicy. Loved reading your book! Thank you for sharing it with us. Such a sweet ending ❤"

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I love this story !!

"From the very first page this story has you it is very well written and a great story line this I recommend to everyone I can not wait to read more!! "

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