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Quelle est votre opinion ?

Scented

"The whole story is twisted and well written. One can truly feel the characters. The old saying of every action has a reaction. For the writers first book, this was intense. Thinking of the new generation and all the differences the youth face, I can see where this book came from... There is space for a sequel ✨️ Writter dont be so hard on yourself. There is always a silver line on a dark cloud."

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Scented

"I loved it so much 😍😍😍😍 It was well written considering this is your first book , in the first few chapters it felt dragging some times (conversation between sofia, her mother and fern), but after that it picked up a good pace 😁😁😁😁 Thank you author for this amazing story 🤩🤩🤩 Can't wait to read the second book 🥰🥰🥰🥰"

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Scented

"It was a great book to read👍🏻❤ keep up the great work "

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Super

"Don't stres! The story was good"

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Scented

"I think for a first book you did great There were scenes I didn’t care for, but you did them tastefully. I hope you don’t get discouraged in your writing I feel you may be to hard on yourself. all in all, I thought it was a good story. I hope to see more stories you have written."

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It's getting too long

"When are they going to make out? "

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Scented

"I'm really liking this book!. I hope it continues to the end.! I believe you are a good writer.! I'm waiting in anticipation for what happens next!"

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Scented

"I LOVE LOVE LOVE this book. Keep writing please. <3"

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Wipf

"Love 8t wish it eas more"

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Scented

"I like the surspenc "

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NOICE

"YES I LOIKED IT :) IT BE GOOD AUTHOR ARE FEERCE"

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Sented book1

"The chapter were drawn out but they kept you intrigued I love that they find a broken girl would have my sister read this she would like it for sure"

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Great

"I like the pacing of the story and how you write it. looking forward to reading more! "

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Please do not change anything in this book

"I love this story the way you have written it had me glued to the pages Thank you for writing this book"

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Scented

"I enjoyed this book even with the grammatical errors and inconsistencies it was still a nice read. I wished the story would have ended with a more complete feeling and intimacy between all of them. "

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My mates

"Good book!!"

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