Fire Heart - Short Story

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Fire Heart

"Enjoyed reading this start to the story. Loved that it started with something to spark your interest immediately. Can't wait to read the rest of the story. "

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Fire Heart Review

"This was a great story, I can't wait to read more about how Sylva is changing. There are hints that she is not the first person to go through this type of change and she is being sent toward a town where she "won't seem all that out of place". The author clearly has talent, it is a little raw and could use some refining that will come with getting feedback here and more writing. Please Write more about this character and this world. I can't wait!"

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