The Mafia Alpha

Bears85

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The Mafia Alpha

"Thanks for the great story. It was short enough to read in one sitting yet very complete and detailed. I look forward to reading more of your work!"

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  • लेखन शैली
  • व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?

viewcoco2007

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The Mafia Alpha

"This was a wonderful short rave. It says a lot about families. I very much love that. You don't have to be blood related to be a family..😊❤️😊"

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  • लेखन शैली
  • व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?

🌹Sharlene💖

30 चैप्टर पढ़े

Short and Sweet

"Thank you for sharing this fascinating, sweet tail. I hope to read more of your work soon. Thank you for writing."

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  • लेखन शैली
  • व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?

Fi Sammels

9 चैप्टर पढ़े

Nice storyline

"Good storyline with lots of love pathos and warm and fuzzies . Cant wait to find out what happens next "

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  • लेखन शैली
  • व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
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salbee76

37 चैप्टर पढ़े

Uhg

"In all honesty this was a horribly written story. It was like the author tried to shove multiple story lines into one book instead of just sticking to one and building on that. I understand there needs to be a bit of drama and mystery but this was so chaotic and so disorganized not a good read at all. Parts of it went so fast and others dragged out too long and unnecessarily. For example in the beginning of the book when everything starts happening to Katie and her brothers once they all meet up with the Carson's Katie and her brothers are overwhelmingly to accepting of everything without shock or anything and just jumped right into everything, quite unbelievable and unrealistic. Innate was overreacting to the way Katie didn't trust him at first which that whole plot line fell apart when Katie knew the whole time what had actually happened with her parents the storyline just didn't make sense."

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  • कहानी
  • लेखन शैली
  • व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?

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