The Princess & The Outlaw (or love in the time of banditry)

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The Princess and the outlaw (or Love in the Time of panditry)

"I think the overall story and theme is a very good one I very much like the theme of forgiveness in spite of one not deserving it, a critique I do have is that I think the overall story would be better if it was a bit more detailed, especially the ending it felt like the ending was rushed a bit or cut short prematurely and different scenes in the ending like the male lead struggling between his rage and desire to kill the villain and also his love for the female lead and wanting to save her, I feel like we didn't get to see him really making the choice and it felt a little fast-paced to where you didn't really know what was going on entirely until he caught her, it all felt a little rushed but the overall story was a very good one."

  • कुल रेटिंग
  • कहानी
  • लेखन शैली
  • व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
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