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"Love the first couple of chapters I’ve read and I’m already invested. Such a good read. I can’t wait to finish it to see what else the Author has to offer!"
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"It was good at first and I really liked it but the more I read the more inconsistencies popped up. Holes in the story, changing plot lines, acting like things that had happened hadn’t happened yet. A few chapters that were essentially repeats with a few sentences changed. The grammar and punctuation were messy. It could be good but needs a rewrite for consistency and clarity "