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Excessively looooong
"This book was exceedingly long. Yes there are many stories, but I think if they were split up by types or separated into 3 books it would help. I've also had to skip a handful of stories because they made no sense. Extreme editing is required because each story has something off about it. It almost sounds like a language barrier or AI assisted. I would give it a much higher rating if the tweaks were made. A lot of the stories were great and super steamy. It has extreme potential. "
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न
क्या यह रिव्यू आपके लिए मददगार था?
