Energetic and constatly moving

"Love this so far! I seriously can't wait to see where the story goes from here. The plot is compelling and the writing style is free-flowing, fast-paced, and quirky. It's a really great balance between interesting analogies/metaphors and some real gut punches describing emotions. There's just enough description of setting and place for the reader to not get lost and, again, keeps the story moving forward. I'm looking forward to seeing the characters develop as currently there's not too much hinting at their internal motivations or, in particualr, why Lena had such a drastic change from a very planned person to taking huge risks with her love life, but I'm interested to see how you delve into this in upcoming chapters. Again, really excellent and I'm looking forward to reading more :D "