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Awesome

"Great mafia story with many twists and turns. A love story that is one sided...it’s so hard to explain what is happening. I love this book "

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ROVAC

"Wonderful read. Couldn’t stop until I finished. So hoped the story continued or there will be a sequel soon."

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Good story

"Good story"

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Intresting plot but ..

"I enjoyed reading it. But, grammatical errors, unedited chapters irked me. The male protagonist somehow seems to be rather backward minded when it comes women & that's put me off a little. The female protagonist didn't come across as naive but plain dumb & ignorant when it came to her father pushing her for human trafficking. "

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It had it's moments

"I have very high expectations regarding mafia stories, and although this story had some decent moments, it didn't thrill me in the least as far as a mafia stories go. The characters were morons to be exact. Dante had way too many idiots working for him, and why would his second in command take a vacation in the middle of a war, that's just stupid. Serena was extremely stupid. I honestly could not stand her character. Dante was one of the worst mafia Don's I've ever read about, he was incompetent and so was everyone else around him. The only good parts of this story was the spicy stuff, there was some fairly decent written kinky shit. I'm glad the chapters were short, or else I've ever would have gotten through this story😒😴"

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